an overall delightful read

Great story! I'm pretty particular about the fanfic I read, and this one is pretty darn good! I enjoyed it thoroughly, and I don't say that often. Good work. I'll definitely be looking for more stories with your name on them.

Wow. That story was amazing! I couldn't stop the first time I read it, and I've re-read it several times. I hope I'm not out of line in requesting a possible sequel? Keep up the good work. You're an amazing writer.

Bravo!

*claps loudly*

A wonderful read with a great ending. I agree you are a great writer and more Ghostbusters is what the world needs. lol

Epona, your story is definitely among the best fan fictions I've read. The captivating plot reeled me in. I stayed up all night and read the whole thing. I just had to discover how the pieces of the puzzle fit together. That's something I have to praise—the overall story made sense and was wrapped up beautifully. I truly enjoyed how well you constructed the ambience of the story. I could really envision the drama unfolding. In addition, I appreciated your clever cultural references.

I loved how you handled all the characters in the story. Your original characters were well conceived, fascinating and had essential purposes. Even though, the focal point of the story was Peter, the other main characters weren't relegated. Egon, Ray, Winston, Janine and even Slimer had their integral functions in the story. Despite the extraordinary circumstances the RGB characters were exposed to, you were quite capable of presenting them in a manner consistent with their canonical personalities. Bravo!

I especially appreciated your handling of paranormal phenomenon. You ingeniously handled Peter's situation. In the hands of a less skilled writer, he could've become a Gary Stu. However, you were very adept in displaying him in a relatable human condition. I was satisfied with the resolution of his situation.

Overall, fantastic work; I salute you.

neat!

Great story. I have spent few nights reading it and it was worth it. :)

This is a really good story! I mean, its really clever and keeps you guessing. Way to go!

This was a really awesome story... Thanks so much for posting it.

Well, I finally got around to sit down and write a review, and I must say... You wrapped this up perfectly. I loved the story in general; everything had been developed supurbly, and every puzzle piece fell into place exactly. (And I must also congratulate you for keeping everyone IN character thoughout.)
I was greatly satisfied by the ending of this. It's been a long time since I've read a fanfiction that kept me wanting to read all the way through without disappointing me at the very end with a cliffhanger or just a poorly done finish.
I'd point out specific scenes that I liked the most, but I think I've said enough. I'm labeling this my favorite fanfiction of the moment before going off to see if anyone else can compare. _

Well, I finally got around to reading it. This really is the best ghostbusters story I've ever read, I enjoyed every second of reading it. I love the interaction between the characters and the story was incredible. I really hope you're going to write more soon, because you're a wonderful writer.

Epona, this isn't fair. You shouldn't be able to write this well AND be a doctor.
And I know, because I edit doctors' writing, and they suck: you're good. Every now and then it gets a little heavy-I could tell the bits you weren't as passionate about writing-but overall, a nice tight plot, believable original characters, lots of delicious detail, and a happy ending. Thanks for this.
-Alirion

This was an awesome story! I greatly enjoyed reading it. As I have said before, this fic really pulled me into it and I loved every second of it. I look forward to more of your stories!

Hi, I am a big fan of RGB, and I just wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed your story. I may not have seen alot of episodes, but I felt that you captured each of the characters perfectly and that all of your OC's acted in a realistic manner (usually Mary/Larry Sueish).
There is a author/webmistress by the name of Sheila Paulson, her webpage is . , I think you would really enjoy some of the fanfiction on it and you should really consider asking her if she would archive your works too.
I look forward to your future work with much anticipation. Please start soon!

Wow! This sure is a great story. The taler of the ancient war is well developed, and your Oc's seem to be quite well-rounded, believable individuals. And you got the guys down pat - I salute you (and can't wait for the next bit!)