| Reviews for Butterflies |
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   nu2 chapter 36 . 9/21/2016 I Love this stoy, please finish this story, I really want to know the ending... |
| Life.like.roses chapter 24 . 10/8/2015 Not a fan of the marriage idea :( was better before though, still great though! Xoxo |
| geregiaromelie chapter 36 . 7/12/2015 I can't believe something like this was left unfinished. :( |
| Kittyangel chapter 36 . 6/10/2015 So... Here is my issue. I felt like the beginning of the story was fantastic. It was super funny, sexy, and I loved their chemistry. I couldn't put it down. I loved it! However, after they got "married" in Vegas the whole story fell apart. I think 7-10 chapters were devoted to wedding planning and leading up to the wedding. There was absolutely no story progression. I feel like you got bored with your own story and that's why you quit. I found myself scrolling through the last 20 chapters because I was so bored. Also, you build up all this sexual chemistry to not have them do it? Or make out even? Missed opportunity. If you're still writing, have you considered a re-write? Go back to your original concept of them hating each other but having to work together. That's where your story needs to go. Save them getting married and such to the epilogue. I wish you the best, Melanie |
| sakusyao chapter 36 . 4/21/2014 Plz plz plz update I want to know what happened next You suspended us in cliff you know that so UPDATE QUICKLY |
| JustAsian chapter 36 . 8/19/2013 Please update! I want to know what happens next XD |
| pricious7divil chapter 36 . 8/17/2013 can i be their maid? hahha. . .i really want to be there!. . ._ |
| jenuuchi chapter 36 . 7/24/2013 I'll kill u if chu don't update now what u died or something? WANT ME TO KICK UR ASS FOR NOT UPDATING HUH? BI- *ahem* UPDATE DAMMIT |
| Dracenxamethyst chapter 36 . 6/2/2013 i loved ur story..its hilarious nd amazing! bt i wsh u cmplted ds stry! its kinda sad nd frstatng not knwng wt xctly hppnd aftr six mnths! Anyways i loved it :) kp writng! |
| aurora0914 chapter 36 . 4/8/2013 Wasnt tomoyo supposed to be pregnant? This story is soo good, and hilarious at the same time! U HAAAAVE TOOO UPDAAAATE! |
| anachronauteur chapter 36 . 10/27/2012 I really loved the story up to this point and hope that one day, even though it's been awhile, you could finish it. :) The situation with them living together is perfect & just needs to be continued! |
| Damesdale Gratia chapter 36 . 10/16/2012 CAN SOMEONE TELL ME WHY SHE NO UPDATE ANYMORE? AAAARRRGGGGHHHH |
| wingedangel791 chapter 36 . 9/23/2012 Update plz! |
| ToBeTrue chapter 4 . 8/10/2012 Hahahhahah the end of this chapter is hilarious! XD Im laughing a lot... XDD Okay, next chap! |
| dandelionerose chapter 36 . 8/9/2012 lovely story... missing the fights between sakura and syaoran... please continue writing the fic... :) |
