| Reviews for You could |
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  Prince chapter 18 . 4/29 This is a great story, are you planning on finishing it? Would be great to hear more :) |
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/24/2019 Ah, I understand why this story is so poorly written now. I noticed that all ‘evil Dumbledore’ are badly written for some reason. It appears your story is no exception. It must have something to do with the right wing conservative/libertarian mindset that appeals to this kind of story. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/24/2019 Too bad this is so poorly written. It could have been an awesome story. |
| Iamjamie77 chapter 7 . 2/20/2018 Sweet but its grapplehook. |
 lilyflower101 chapter 18 . 6/12/2017 This is an okay story. Would've been better without harry giving in to it. |
| lilyflower101 chapter 11 . 6/12/2017 I hate that they bonded. Made me like this story less. |
| elfprincess042 chapter 18 . 3/29/2016 Great story. Can't wait for next chapter |
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/31/2015 oh come on why no put bumbledork on fire instead? |
| Eagle-Eyes chapter 18 . 3/5/2015 Cute ending ...hopefully to a sequel |
| ntalcenent chapter 18 . 8/17/2014 This could have ended perfectly at chapter 15 as an awesome angst story. Now it has a new beginning and that's interesting too... but I believe it is preferable remembering this as ending with Snape realizing too late that Harry has gone, taking nothing and leaving a cloak with a locked heart. |
| ntalcenent chapter 7 . 8/17/2014 Wow, Dumbledore really is a manipulative prick in this fanfic. Nice to see the good general be so persistent in his pursuit of ultimate good for wizardkind tho. Probably a great chess player Dumbledore. |
| Lumcer chapter 18 . 6/5/2014 I'm Deffinately liking this! Totally not what I expected. Thanks for the story! KCK-Lumcer |
| speaker chapter 7 . 3/10/2014 I'm only on chapter 7...and I have to say. Its been a long time since I have read a story, that made me feel so disgusted that I couldn't even read all the chapters available. This is borderline rape. trying to force someone to be with someone else even though they don't want to...its sick on so many levels. I don't know if you wrote this just to get us to understand the situation Harrys in, or just plain progression... I'm not going to bother reading further to find out. A little advice. write longer chapters that just doesn't contain people trying to force someone to 'bond' with someone else against their will. your losing readers. |
| Neko1000 chapter 7 . 7/5/2013 f*ck u... but hell, this is so good... |
| hawkswench chapter 18 . 4/14/2012 I will have to say I am glad that you haven't abandon this story. Are you going to tell what happened to Albus? I can't imagine that he would keep his nose out of their business. After all to him every thing he does is justified. Are you going to reveal what happened with Fudge and Harry? |
