Ok...
I am a bit worried

Clow, you created a vouyer, I hope you are proud of yourself

Touya: Give me back Yukito
Yue: No
Touya: I am telling Sakura!
Yue *gasp*

Yue you can't cockblock Yukito, I am sure there are rules about that!

Of course Kero would ask that

I started reading this year's ago but I got distracted before it was finished and didn't realize it had been picked back up. Actually, it drove me to draw Your again for the first time in a couple of years, so thank you for that!

It's a privilege to be able to re-read this story as an adult, with a fresh perspective! I remember parts of it, and now I look forward to revisiting them. Hooray!

I normally don't ever review, but this work was so interesting that I had to. You are a fantastic writer, and I'm not surprised at all that you're published now. You're just wonderful at the art of storytelling, description, and more. That was what kept me reading even though there were two things that did faze me a little, and would normally have completely turned me away from a fanfic if it hadn't been so darn good! I'll begin with the small one, on the topic of spelling-I'm so curious as to some of your spelling choices, because it's clear that you know what you're doing, wielding a strong arsenal of vocabulary and so masterfully crafting your writing. Things like "surprize," well, took me by surprise, and I'd love to know how you came to some of your spellings like that.

The other topic was characterization-Yue having feelings towards Nadeshiko was odd, but understandable somehow the way you structured your story and narrated it, leading and building up to it all throughout. Fujitaka being jealous, however, was extremely strange to me and I'm not sure it fit with what I'd imagine based on canon. Nevertheless, I think the way you resolved things with that conversation between him and Yue was on par.

Obviously, you don't have to listen to anything I say-except that I think you're an amazing writer and sincerely hope you find success as a published author!

Kudos,

Natalie

Really liked this story so much feelings and so many beautiful moments.

Awww, this chapter was so sweet! :3

I'll admit I can see the practicality in a hair cut, but I wish it hadn't been described as being so short. Anyway, the last part about the skinny jeans was a good add on, a bit of humor to contrast the heavy amount of emotion in Touya's inner thoughts.

That almost seemed like a filler chapter, but it was so sweet, and there was so much emotion!

After following your story for so long, this is a nice note to end your story. And no need to apologize for not having Melin in until the end; it is the simple action that you did that counts. I liked how you gave Nadeshiko the last name of Avalon since that is the last name of the Kinomoto's in the English dubbed anime. I do like the wedding scene, but I wonder what Nadeshiko looked like to Tomoyo's mother? Thank you for such as wonderful story that has had me returning to it time and again. I plan to visit your story again!

Omg I stayed up late to keep reading thus and now my eyes are so red they're itchy! I can't believe that's really the end! I want more yue and nadeshiko ... Or maybe some yuexnadeshiko?...it's like the ultimate crack pairing but I kind of like it. If you hadn't ended it when you did I would have been curious to see what fujitaka had been thinking from his point of view when he told yue to "take care of his wife" \0_o/ I hope you write a sequel to the fic some day when you feel up to it.

Aww I hope you'll write a sequal with Yue/Yukito/Touyo since I felt like that Yue/Youyo's relationship ends so quickly in this chapter. I would love to read more to the point when Yue will learn to love someone else in his new life. I really like this story, the angst between these people is amazing to read and very realistic enough to their characters. There were some points where I tried to gloss over and not flinch like Yue liking Sakura's mother and Yue at his weakest moments. Although I like a venerable, confused Yue, I hope to find another story where it will feature a strong Yue that is slightly feral/wild and more confident of what he wants. But thanks for this lovely story!