It was really good. Nice story. There is one small detail I noticed that was wrong was that you kept misspelling Ayeka's name. You kept spelling it as Aekea. At first i thought it might have a typo but it was spelled that throughout that way throughout the whole story. Her name can actually be spelled in two ways. Aeka, or Ayeka. I'm not trying to sound mean or anything. If I do, then I apologize. I just wanted to point out this minor. It was actually starting to bother me after a while. Well, it's still a really good story though. Keep up the good work.

I'm reading this after the fact, but better late than never I suppose. It was a cute story, Tenchi waiting til the last minute to figure out what Ryoko truly wants. That kind of present I rather give than going shopping at Macy's anytime. :)

Very Well Done. This caprtured the true meaning of Christmas in a believable tenchi Setting. Thank You for the early Christmas gift

I really enjoyed this.