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   Acdefghijklmnopqrstuvwxyz chapter 1 . 10/17/2010 This may not be constructive criticism, but I do feel the need to say this, even though it is highly likely this review will be ignored. I read one chapter and it is extremely clear to me that you are an excellent writer. Perfect grammar, structure and your ideas are creative. The only thing stopping me from reading the whole story and its sequel is the fact it is centered on Sean and Ellie. Don't get me wrong, they're extremely strong and beautiful characters... But for me their romance almost doesn't seem real on the show - like Sean was a rebound for Ellie when she found out Marco was gay and when Sean and Emma broke up. I am a huge Sean and Emma fan because they're romance is beautiful. I'm not saying this story is bad. In fact, it is extremely good. But I think I may not go any further. Again, this is something I thought I should say. Take care. Abcdefghijklmnopqrstuvxyz |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/14/2010 I absolutely love this. It's so deep and intriguing... makes me love Sellie even more than I already did, which I didn't even think was possible! They had the best connection. They were so mature and they just "got" each other; Ellie needed an escape other than hurting herself and Sean, (secretly) needed someone to rely on that wouldn't give up on him. I think this story really conveys that. Definitely keep writing, love love love this, love Sellie, great job! |
| Addilynn Rose chapter 6 . 3/6/2010 This is a good story so far. I totally understand what Ellie goes throught. I'm trying to stop cutting myself have been for years... |
| DarkDefender89 chapter 15 . 6/25/2009 Ashley and Manny suck they should just date each other and leave Craig for Ellie. :( |
| DarkDefender89 chapter 10 . 6/25/2009 Craig doesn't belong with Ashley, EVERYBODY knows he belongs with Ellie. DUH! CRELLIE FOREVERMORE! But its still a good story. (: |
| Running-Wild22 chapter 10 . 4/29/2009 I never liked how Manny caught all the crap when her and Craig were found out. Kia |
| Running-Wild22 chapter 7 . 4/29/2009 Aw...! |
| Running-Wild22 chapter 3 . 4/29/2009 They're good fro each other. Kia |
| Running-Wild22 chapter 1 . 4/29/2009 Glad I found this always liked Sean and Ellie! Kia |
| allweknowisfalling chapter 24 . 2/5/2009 whao! I didn't even realize the big ol' name switch was in this chapter! whoa... I loved everything Alex said, you really got her character into it, and everyone at the lunch table,too... bahaha, this line made me laugh: “or on your lap…dude, she’s still all about your cock, man.” hahaha |
| allweknowisfalling chapter 22 . 2/5/2009 lovely chapter. 'I'm Not Okay' iS a FUCKING AWESOME SONG! haven't listened to it in ages.. I can't believe I'm almost done with this story! whoa |
| allweknowisfalling chapter 21 . 2/5/2009 whoa, interesting cutting/sex connection. I thought that was really cool. |
| allweknowisfalling chapter 19 . 2/3/2009 haha, nice boy/ice cream theory! hehe, the mark/ashely stuff was cute! |
| allweknowisfalling chapter 18 . 2/3/2009 lovely chapter! At first I don't think I was too keene on the story actually following an actual episode - I guess because I was use to the story being so AU, or something... I love how Tracker took care of Ellie. If it wouldn't be so totally out there, I'd make them a pairing and write about them on my own! haha Finally! a song by a band I know! Emery is cool! just a side question, what's butterfly stitching? |
| allweknowisfalling chapter 17 . 2/1/2009 lovely chapter! Sean's gift to Ellie was the sweetest thing ever! |
