Sirius was too much of a cowered!

Ha ha! I do believe Sirius just got the best of his dear cousin, Bella without her knowledge. Always good to have that to hold over her head, huh? Again, very well done!

TK

I know i've read this before, in the Harry Potter Dialogue Centre in the official HP site... though in a different ff, what's it doing here? cuz i remember it was many short ficlets by one single author there, this was one of them, unless you're that author... i mean, i love this thing, it was my favorite of her ficlets, i just don't know if it's the same person... or maybe SHE copied off you... oi -_-?

Highly enjoyable, wonderful, and lovely. The manner in whihc you've written the characters, having the speak for themselves, is brilliant. There is enough description to keep the balance. Yes, lovely write, Bella and Sirius are so much fun to work with.

brilliant!

What I find intresting is that Bellatrix let Sirius go, even with his words I still think she should have blasted him into next millenium.

Surely something that could happen! I see it. No goodbye kiss - on the cheek? at least? bah fooy. Realistic. Not overly creative, but it's there. Like it, regardless.

this actually was an increadibly well-written foreshadowing of what happened in order of the phoenix. the dialogue was tastefully written in a way that leaves me picturing this as being the last time they spoke before that encounter. nice work. :D

man! it's all about one-shots with you and I love em!
*_~Brittny Anmylica Cain~_*
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brilliant!
fcuking cathy

Scary/Noticeable foreshadowing *shudder* about her killing him without his wand to defend himself (that's awkward wording

I love Sirius's attitude, he's absolutely adorable! Great, great job! I would love to see more of your writings featuring these two.

An interesting exercise in power and rivalry, with an interesting (and possibly unintentional) subtext; is she attracted to him? Is he attracted to her? I get hints of both.