Reviews for Be My Downfall
Guest chapter 1 . 3/8
It took me 20 years before I realized that Gundam Wing is my favorite anime.. And it took me for awhile to rewatch the whole anime and knowing that there's a sequel called the "Frozen Teardrop" Ms. Authornim this fanfic is so absorbed and I just wanted to read some chapters but I've ended up read until the last chapter.. And its so hearbreaking especially the 5 chapters and I can't believe it that you relena has been died.. And I'm still crying until now.. The story and the plot was well organize (if this is the word fit in) although it took so long the investigation about the assassination attempt.. And its kinda pissed me off that relena was poisoned because of that lunatic secretary of her.. And for heero he was a jerk at the first 10 chapters but he managed to keep in up to relena.. If I were given up a rating of 1/10 i would give my 10 because i do love the story.. Congratulations authornim.. I hope if your going or keep going to write again about heero and relena maybe next it would be really a happy ending.. Lovelots!
enelle1989 chapter 17 . 6/15/2019
The story left me heartbroken, but I’ve got to say that’s one of the best stories about Heero and Relena I’ve ever read. Thank you for your work. Now I need to piece together my heart...
arharge chapter 17 . 5/23/2018
Wow that was incredibly emotional.
iKiohri chapter 17 . 1/5/2017
The last chapter literally ripped and broke my heart. I was grossly sobbing by the end of it. I think this is literally one of the best Heero x Relena stories I've read on this site, and there are a lot of quality 1xR too, so that's definitely saying something. The title is so apt to the plot. I love the characterizations and the portrayal of Heero and Relena's relationship here. It really makes you think. I'm so glad I found this gem. Thank you so much for such a wonderful read.
Guest chapter 17 . 4/19/2016
Omg. I cried. No, I bawled my eyes out. Such a heart-wrenching story. Beautifully written... although, I've been hoping for a happy ending. I love this story. You did the characters justice and ugh.. why am I still crying? Lol.
jhian casey chapter 17 . 3/3/2015
this really brought tears in my eyes..'(
at first i hated heero for being an ass.. damn! sleeping with prostitutes! that's foul the he got to have relena.. anywaaaaaayyyyyy.. i still love the story but i hope relena didnt die so that heero would have a happy family.. (now im on tears again.. huhuhu..) great job and keep writing gundam wing fics even if its been ages since the anime.. well, lots of love from me.!)
Yumi90 chapter 17 . 12/4/2014
THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL AND TRAGIC. So many feelings in this story. You are very talented and look forward to your work.
Foxtale3 chapter 4 . 7/21/2014
Wow. The interaction between Hero and Relent in the hospital...wow. Fantastic dialog. Great writing!
Taquiner chapter 17 . 7/8/2012
Wonderfully written & perfect characterization. Wish you'd write more Heero/Relena fics... :p
Kaylee21 chapter 17 . 5/19/2012
It's been a while since I've read any Gundam fics but...this is just so amazing...heartbreaking...but amazing. Wonderful job!
bbybear85 chapter 17 . 12/7/2011
Oh. My. God. This is AMAZING. I cried. And then I cried. And then I laughed. But then I cried a lot more.
Isabelle Black chapter 17 . 9/13/2010
I have just read your fanfic. Even when I have WAY too much to do before tomorrow. But I just couldn't stop. I have just one word to describe it: amazing .

It was amazing...

I must admit: It took me till the last chapter to accept it: you killed Relena. I hated it and I loved it. Hated it because, obviously, it was sad, heartbreaking... everyhting was perfect... and then, that was what made this fanfic so unforgetable, it was real, because not everything ends up OK.

I just... loved it.

xoxo

Belle
oblivous bystander chapter 16 . 8/5/2010
this..is..so..sad. [[ breaks my heart! it's cute, yes. Ive always liked it when Relena has to be tough and go through pain cuz for some reason i like it better when the women tough it out and be strong. but die? so sad. either way, good story.
gabyhyatt chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
i love it
sylvaniae chapter 17 . 10/30/2009
I honestly don't know whether I've reviewed this story before or not, but I know that I have read it previously back in my freshman year of college. I loved this story when I read it then, and years later, it has made me cry again. I had tears running down my face as I read this last chapter. It's very in character that Relena would give her life for her child, but I think some of the dialogue with others besides Heero and Relena is a bit jilted or out of character at times (more so with Wufei, really). That said, I still loved this story, and I loved seeing Heero as such a great father!
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