What no. Why. But I kind of had a feeling that u were going to do something like that. But still that is just evil

There are many twist and turns in this story. I love it. I was telling my mom about it and she was even gasping with shock about what was happening in the story.

suprise

YOUR A GENYOUSE! I think that i just figured out what happens next... It's always fun to go on a hunch and see if your wright or not. Don't ever stop wrighting... your story is one of the 3 best story's i've read in all my life!

Your loyal fanfic follower,
Azura13- i don't have an account i just love to read-

first inuyashas mothers name is izayoi and second WTF DID U MAKE HER SAY YES IMMA KICK YO AZZ WHEN I HUNT U DOWN

moshi moshi...

gomen, i know thats not the proper hello for the situation but i much prefer it over konichiwa... its too cliche... any ways the purpose for me reviewing a story thats been up for a few years is that i just wanted ta let u know that u made several mistakes that kind of irritated me...

in one chapter you said that kouga was human, but then you said that he was a wolf demon... you also said that sesshomaru was a human but then u made him a full on inu youkai... you also stated in chapter 1 taht kagome was 15 then not even half way through chapter two u said she was 16...

most of the errors u made are with either physical features u mixed up or races, some of them were with the ages as well...

all in all though i am enjoying your story... im on ch. 16 and just started reading it about 10:30 and its now 1:35am... the only times i stopped were to get some cheese and agane ta heat up some goma-anko manju and get some iced tea...

i really like the plot and am getting a little upset that inuyashas not back yet... even though im a 20yr old male i mustadmit when u killed me off i started ta cry...(only a little tho){hehe}and when kagome got the news and the sirens and all that other stuff i started up agane a little... the package and the fact that it was a tape and a cd didnt help stop me from tearing up either... thanks for the heart felt story and emotions in your versions of the characters...

keep it up if u are and get back to it if ur not...

Good work...

Nimaj Ned out

dont mean to bother u again but i dont no if u are supposed 2 use ur gaia or just make up aaname but if u can put ur gaia for the name tning its ...awesomenessI_LUV_ thought id tell ya! oh and i just saw ur list of chapters and ...um aparantly uve been writing this for a agan luv teh story and sorry to bother u- im polite and awkward w/ people leave...me...alone! and again sorry to bother u and sorry im so clueless. no worries!

this is one of the beter storys (so far) that ive red but icant be mean its not my nature AND i also dont read alot of storys AND i havent even red all ov the stori yet BUT i can tell it will be grate from start to end. ok i just readthe thing at the bottom and no that i think about ... I CAN BE MEAN! -jk-

anywho but i dunno if this is recent writing-man that would be fun 2 say...i think i will!... im done ... OK-if u wrote this a long time ago and ur tired of "constructive critism" but... I DONT HAVE ANY "CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM". like i sayd i cant be mean.

well no worries i look forward to reading more of your stories and man this review is bye. .

i thoght they wont be with each other at first but thank you for making him live ! i love the story write some more !

Oh man.

Does kawaii mean cool or cute?

NICE so far! His mother is named Izayoi in the third movie.

Hey! loved ur story! I've seen Winter Sonata with my mom and at the end, we were both crying. (lol, we actually used up the whole tissue box xD) I loved that drama. it's so sad and sweet! Anyway, great job on this!

Kimiko

well i was gonna read your story but i realized the chapters were mudle up so um i've kinda went thru all the chap and found out which chap was which...man that took a long time but yea i've finally wrote it on paper.

1) chapter 2

2) chapter 12

3) chapter 15

4) chapter 10

5) chapter 23

6) chapter 18

7) chapter 1

8) chapter 16

9) chapter 11

10) chapter 3

11) chapter 4

12) chapter 5

13) chapter 6

14) chapter 7

15) chapter 8

16) chapter 9

17) chapter 21

18) chapter 13

19) chapter 14

20) chapter 17

21) chapter 19

22) chapter 20

23) chapter 22

24) chapter 24

25) chapter 25

26) chapter 26

27) chapter 27

28) chapter 28

29) epilogue

well um i'm not complaining or any thing i just thought i'll let you know. but um yea enough of that i'm gonna go read it soon maybe not now coz it's 2:32 am. probably read it later... [forgive me if i have any spelling mistake, i'm not very good with spelling]

i love this drama but can you explain how the chapters work? because on chap 3 it says chap15 and its getting kinda confusing. plus the fact that there wee many details skipped