My simple mind cannot comprehend what u make of this fic but all and all it's quite good...

I realise I didn't review this.
Thanks, q. Yer a sweet one. .

wow...deep and nice. keep it up

I like this style a lot, it's interesting, and you seem to have Goku right on target.
I'd like to see more of your characterizations.

Very nice, I like your description and view of Goku's mind. You were able to portray a child becoming a man - and yet still have a mature mentality about it (being that it is Goku).
Again, well done. I look forward to more of your work.
-Iapetus

*drool* wow. I love the imagery, the sheer blunt not-quite-poetics of this. Enthralling fiction - it's gorgeous.