Reviews for Emergence of Heritage |
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![]() ![]() dude, you dont call a girlxgirl GAY thats just plain weird. It's LESBIAN... bruhhh |
![]() ![]() Hi thank you for this Story. So sad you stopped writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() Incredible |
![]() ![]() Oh my god, LOL! I was going to quit last chapter but I thought I'd just take a quick peak at the next... and good god! Why didn't you just make this story slash? Because even if it isn't slash, Harry is a certified poofter! The only thing lacking is him breaking into tears and maybe getting his period (maybe a new male veela power? To substitute for his complete and utter lack of libido or male hormones? Lmao!) |
![]() ![]() Ugh... I kept reading, hoping against hope that you'd change your mind and Harry would actually grow some balls. But... nooope. I could spot that this story is written by a woman from a thousand miles away, really - you have no idea how men think regarding sex, which makes this entire story quite absurd if you think about it. Harry has an entire school of bitches hungry for his dick and does he even for a single second get an erection? Consider capitalizing on it? Do *anything* to indicate he is actually a hormonal teenage male? Nope, he talks about how scared he is of affection (with his lesbo girl-friend), talks about his feelings and reassures everyone that he is indeed a spineless pussy who won't do anything that isn't strictly allowed by social norms. Everything he does is passive and weak - it is utterly female behavior all the way through. With the singular exception of the very beginning, when he was apparently acting seductive towards girls naturally, right before you randomly decided Hermione was a lesbian (and completely forgot about all of his male veela instincts.) Anyway, reading this was a good laugh so thanks! |
![]() ![]() This story Harry gets the greatest gift to man, and squanders it utterly by being a mangina. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Luna Wouldn't be in the same class as harry being a year behind him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very enjoyable read. I hope you can return to it someday. |
![]() ![]() I hope ur still on this site cause I want you to know how much I fucking hate you |
![]() ![]() i wish this story had continued |
![]() ![]() One of the best I've read lately hope you put another chapter up some time soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() I haven't laughed this hard while reading a story in a long time! Well done sir! |
![]() ![]() ![]() well... looks like this story is on the back burners... shame. I was really enjoying it! hope one day you decide ff is something you want to do again and you come back to your work here. great job! |