Interesting..
I have to say good job on the writting. I enjoyed reading it very much!
-Savannah GilVe B-

This was a beautiful craft of angst and regeneration. Thanks for sharing so many years ago.

This was actually a little painful to read. I mean the writing was great, the plot was great, the characterization, and basically twchnically, everything was great. But the angst just dragged forever. 1 step forward, 11 steps back. All I could think of at the end was she doesn't deserve him. She was just bitter and making him miserable in her indicisiveness to get back at him.
I don't know, that's not how relationships work.
Otherwise, this is very well written.

Wow. I think that had to be one of my favorite Rory/Jess stories ever. That was great. I'm off to read your other stories now!

i enjoyed your story. now i'm off to check out more of your stuff. thanks for writing.

well done chapter. i enjoyed Rory's train of thought at the end of the chapter. Jess's costume was pretty funny too.

brilliant chapter. i loved how you explained jess's involvement with school and the sceen with kirk was really funny. well written.

I'm enjoying your story. i especially liked the last few lines of dialog in this chapter. lorelai's response to the salt etc was very funny

good!

Wow, this was a fantastic story! I loved that he didn't leave but it was still difficult. Of course it was tough to read them go through so much struggles, as a Lit fan who just wants them to be happy, journey was realistic.

Jess and Rory were themselves ... both very in character. Neither of them changed overnight and Jess was just ... JESS. I could picture all of this in my head easily.

I'm glad that they got their happy ending though!

Wonderful job!

Hello!

I loved this story! very different from all the others "What-if-jess-had-stayed" stories, in a great way.

I'ts very well written, you've done an amazing job, one of my favourite chapters are ch.11.

The interaction in the story just clicks, you've captured everyone wonderfully, and from my own experience I know that's hard to do.

Keep on writing!

I really really love this story :)

Very good story! You did an awesome job capturing the character's essences, it made it very believable...actually I kind of wished the show had gone this way...*sigh*

Ok I can see a sequel to this.. Jess at Yale.. it'd be awsome! I'd always wished he'd go to Yale with Rory! LOL] He was always smart enough.. everyone knew that.. lol] Just a little suggestion.. but other than that.. great story..

Aww i love this story. I love how the finally get together! Its great!