I look forward to seeing this one continue!

Where's the rest of the story? You basically have a very good begining here and you have caught my interest, so Where's the rest of the story? Nice first chapter. Write MORE soon!

I really hope you write more in this story. It is turning out nicely.

It's been almost two years since you've updated this. Where did they land?

I'll give you some fresh peach pie if you write some more.

hey this is really good you should keep going. from what i've read you got the stroy pretty much mapped out

*takes a gigantic breath* YOU HAD BETTER FINISH THIS! I WANT MORE!
Ahem. Yes, please finish. Tis very good and I am curious to see where this goes. Please?
~Cerulean Sky

Interesting :)

*giggles* ee! I pressed the purple button...
anyways, where was I? oh yeah! great start so far! the introduction of a prophecy/story type thing was cool but... i'm a little confuzzled. Can't you only gate somewhere if you've already been there? or something like that? *shakes head*
oh, I don't know! *sigh*
Next step: chapter 2!
p.s. who shoved Meira into the lands of the Haighlei? (this is my natural curiosity peeping in, fyi...)

Yay! Something new! No more people from real life thrown into Valdemar to save it from bandits/renegade mages/sporks from hell/ Cheez Wiz. *breathes sigh of relief*
:)
Kierseth
*waves flag reading "Ban repetious Mary-Sues!""

poor abused Fireblade... and i thought there wasn't scuh thing as too many fics.

oh well, i like them all, so whatever you update, i win! _

Hawk

Tis got a lot of potential, I love your style *smiles* Update soonest please *promises choccies if ya do*

interesting...Are you feeling better now?