I am lovin this story. Update soon so i can see what happens.

I really liked this chapter's story. It really teaches a valuable lesson. I hope I don't end up like Lesley did here. I feel bad for her.

Absolute Great! I love this story more than any other pokemon fan-fic I've ever seen on ANY this was stared such a long time...but could you update the story for the ssome of us who want to read the ideas you have to come up with.

Great great story. I hope you continue it.

HAHAHAHA this is a really good story! Its a shame an update in the near future looks bleak...

Woo... Intresting story. I laughed at the part when that Sentret made a mistake on the 91/19. HAHAHAHA!