Usually nerds have better spelling. Your beta should spot those errors surely. It's hard to get to grips with a Snape who's sickly sweet on the one hand and on the other violently attacks innocents in his Death Eater guise. Your descriptions of sexy Snape and his mansion (lucky sod) are a joy to read. Thank you.

I really enjoyed this story! I'm looking for a great ss/hp, and you delivered. Very well done. I loved theur relationship, how Snape slowly becomes more tolerant of his friends. I love the other professors take on theur relationship, and adding Bill was a nice touch. Somehow he was one of my favorite secondary characters - I just liked what he added to the story.
I'm very excited to see what you do in the sequel! Thanks so much for sharing this story!

I loved this story. The relationship between Severus and Harry was just fabulous. I especially enjoyed how you wrote Severus struggling with separating Harry's actual age of 17 with looking so desirable at 27 and that coloring the way he sees the 17 year old Harry... just amazing. First story I've read with that sort of aging potion and not time travel.

I'm about to start your sequel even though I know its unfinished from skimming some reviews and I can only hope that you haven't given it up completely.

I swear for most of this chapter I was internally screaming "show him your bloody forehead you fucking nitwit!"

So, isn't Harry considered an adult in the wizarding world?

Sounds good already!

I love this story so far, but, I can't seem to find the link to the unedited versions of this story. If you have the time can you email me the links to:

Molly is evil.. LOL, well it's fun to see her play the role with her kids. xD

Anyway, I'm not too sure about the relationship between Severus and Harry.. At this point, I'd say, yes, it's going WAY too fast. It's hasn't even been a whole day together and they're being all nice to each other. Seeing them starting to be touchy feely all of a sudden is disappointing. There's a reason Unresolved Sexual Tension is fun you know.. It's all about the teasing and baiting! XD

I'm a few chapters into this story and I must say it's quite fun! XD

It's really refreshing to see a playful Severus. Still his sarcastic and nasty self, but with more people to play words with. Minerva and Tom seems to enjoy the banters. XD

Having trouble finding nc17 but like this story can't what to read more

i just loved this! it had me squealing and blushing like mad.
thanks so much for writing this. im going on to the sequel now!

Hmm, good feelings from Snape touching the scar? Interesting.

So, I'm guessing the fruit punch was from Fred and George? Whatever could happen to Harry?

How would they learn the unforgivables if they were muggle children i assume that the orphanage was a muggle one so how?

Good chapter. BTW, The 'age of consent' in the UK Is sixteen , not eighteen as it is, I understand, in the USA. So actually that would not have been a worry for Harry.