hI tara.b amy i really enjoyed your story and I would like you to finish of this story , because it's really good to read by the way . ... KEEP IT UP OK GREAT WORK

Can you update soon author? Because your story is great! I really want to know what will happen to yugi and yami/pharaoh... Will yugi go to yami in Egypt or he will stay? ( sorry bout my grammar I'm really not good at it..)

Oh my gosh I loved chapter 12! *squeels* I know its been a loooong time since you've updated but I really hope you continue this story. I think you loved writing it just as much as I loved reading it! It was an awesome story that needs more! I loved how you portrayed the characters I think you did a really good job with them. Your English is really good too. Some people tell me its a hard language to learn for a second language. I wouldn't know though I speak it fluently but we like to use it in a relaxed kind of way here making up words as we go. Its actually pretty fun. Anyway back to the point, I did find some mistakes (really rare congrats :)) and some words that could've been switched around but other than that, amazing! Please continue the story!
Kelly Tempest (I think that's what I go by st the time I write this)

The real name's Amy.

you have now gained a favoriter to this story I mean come on! it's AWESOME!

I love this story! :) please write more..

Oh yeah, finally found this again!

I remember reading this before I even had an account.

Waaah another great story! I just looove how you display puzzleshipping! all the emotions! They just really blow me away.

Hello! Just read your story and my eyes are falling shut. I'm way too tired.

I just wanted to say that the story is wonderful, although some conversations are too long for me to stay awake at. Sometimes I had to read three times before it would settle in my mind.

Anyway, the story was great and I'm happy to read (as you wrote in Deutsch) that Yugi does want to go with Yami, but that there are some things on their way to make it complicated.

Pity you will never update this story again.

Just wanted to tell you I read the German review reply and I'm still surprised I could understand it, considering I haven't had German in 5 years or so. (I live in Holland, so maybe that makes it easier)..

I hope you will ever update this story. But I'm not keeping my hopes up.

Thanks for the chapters!

please write more of this soon!

please write more of thsi story soon its a good one!

please write more soon!

*pokes authoress* So... what is going to happen is Yami going to tell Yugi about stuff?

please write more of this story it is a good one!

please write more of this story soon it is a good one!