I want to read more. Please update

I really hope you decide to randomly start working on this again because it's so good! I need to know what's going to happen now! You've got me hooked.

I loved this story and all the twists. Do you intend to continue it? I would love to read it until the end...

I've been going back reading a whole bunch of Dark Angel fanfic and came across this one. I really like this one of yours, but it's such a shame it was never finished. I'd have loved to know if Alec made the deal with Lydecker.

I dont suppose you plan on finishing this? It's been a couple of years..but its really good and has great potential. ).

~Willow

Awesome story! I really hope you update this story! I really like it!

Please update soon!

I love this story!

update plz comon we need some m/a :P logan bashing

You haven't updated this for AGES - please update! I really want to see how this turns out.

This is a really good plot, but I do have a few suggestions.

First, I just don't think Alec would call Max "Maxie". Its not his style, just like I don't think Logan would go "Oh my god, Max!" Logan is too reserved and calculating to start panicing like that.

You writing style is pretty good, but slightly jerky and I suggest getting a beta.

Over all, this is a pretty good start for the fic. Nice job.

ppms

Thank you for finally working on this story again. I thought it was dead. Please post again soon.

I like this story, but i love "Forgotten but never forgiven "please update cap 11

AWESOME! There are a few typos, but this was GREAT! Can't wait to see what you write next!