I have read a lot of variations on this, but this is the first one that completely breaks the fourth wall.

I'm not even a Buffy fan, and I love this! You actually know how to write active descriptions, hooray! Exclamation points!

This is hilarious. XD I have to add this to my Favorite Stories.

I have to say, I have read through a lot of humour/parody today and this is by far the most intelligent. Not laugh-out-loud funny perhaps, but very subtle and well done.

This is really funny, and I wish that somehow you would continue it. Maybe Mary Sue could find her way to Los Angeles and strike terror into the hearts of the Fang Gang (plus Kate & Lindsey?).

That was FABULOUS! Please do a sequel. Or sequels, plural. Pretty please?

Oh gosh, I just fell of my chair from laughing so hard, this was perfect! I loved it, I try as heard as I can to avoid Mary-Sue fics but you can’t avoid them all… Next to AU’s and stories in which authors insert themselves into there own fics Mary-Sue fics are the worst. Anyhow this is excellent best mockery of a Mary Sue That I have ever seen. More parodies soon…

Well that was absolutely brilliant and down right hilarious... Mary Sue fics are just the worst out a whole bunch of awful fanfic traits. Actually, high school AUs are pretty bad but let's not go into that here and now.
I found her incessant babbling to be incredibly amusing. But, as with most parodies, it's actually better written than the thing it's parodying, which is actually very sad. This was great work, I hope you write many more parodies!
DOWN WITH MARY SUES...

SAVE US AUTHOR! Kill the stupid Mary Sue!

P.S. I have know idea what the f**k I just read, but it was actually quite amusing.

lmfao. That was so funny, and so true. This is truely a great parody. I can't stop laughing.

*snickers*

Good job!

“I have inherited the gift of mind-reading from my mother, a few vampiric abilities...stronger than any Slayer before me.”

It's funny because it's just so damn true.

(I meant to copy the whole paragraph, but it seemed to take up a bunch of space...course I could copy all my favourite lines and make an essay, but considering you wrote it I doubt you would want to read it again...)

lol... hilarious! I started cracking up out loud at "...and I've been living in this beautiful little town called Everwood..." The sad thing? Your explanations of her relation to Giles and Spike are actually stronger than most Mary Sues.

Heh, heh! Oh, I love it, I love it! :-D

LOL! I absolutely loved it! This one goes right into my favorite stories list.

"Settiai? You're telling me that the only person who can stop the Mary Sue is a sixteen-year-old girl who sometimes takes a whole year between updating stories?"

This is funny.