Reviews for The Veils Over Others' Eyes |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sheeesh that was... crazy mind blowing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing and interesting story good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ::chuckles:: Quite the read. Quite the read indeed. I wonder what would happen if you decided to continue this. At any rate, I enjoyed this wonderful little chuckle-fest. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice! I loved the "shampoo's stupid" part |
![]() ![]() ![]() the last bit was a bit wild i liked the story, but im unsure if you will/have ever do/done a sequel, l like the ranma here, and akanexmousse is unique to say the least Jaron out |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY FRIKIN' GOD! WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU! ARE YOU SICK IN THE HEAD? ... ... ... But...I kinda...enjoyed...this...sick, twisted and downright WRONG fanfic...Ryoga's in love with RANMA! Akane likes Duck-boy...NABIKI IS A...SICK YURI GIRL! RANMA AND SHAMPOO REALLY DO LIKE EACH OTHER (now that part...was a bit okay...) THIER PARENTS HIRE SADISTS TO KIDNAP AKANE? KASUMI IS A WHORE! IS A FREAK! THE KUNO FAMILY ARE THE SAVIORS OF THE WORLD! Please tell me...were you high on anything when you wrote this? ... ... This is the most violent review I've ever written...more than the one where Kurama (from yu yu hakusho) gets turned into a girl... |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay, that was good. very imaginative! are you going to write a second chapter or just leave us with out imaginations? i can't beleive what an incredibly good author you are! |
![]() ![]() Humm... this one is just sadistic in that it ends... Where's the rest of it? More more more! |
![]() ![]() Whoooeeee. Wicked satire of the Ranma 1/2 world. I can't take it seriously, but if ya look at it from a skewed angle, it does make sense. Alhtough I think you may be a bit too generous on Shampoo's part. But it's still good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, this is frighteningly IN-charecter stuff. except maybe shampoo, i mean she's not as stupid as alot of people think, but she really never acts anywhere near this perceptive. i just don't buy her actions. otherwise, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, that certainly was a Freudian experience. I feel like I just got out of my psy. class o.o Very interesting. I like it, yes indeed very well done. I didn't much care for teh Ukyou-Nabs coupling, but eh that's just me, I did like Shampoo tho' very cute. Keep up the good work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have to say - this is a thought provoking piece. Most likely not what Takahashi had in mind when the manga was written, but at least something that makes us take a step back and actually examine the goings-on in the Ranmaverse. Anyone who lets their biases interfere with their enjoyment of this fic gets what they deserve. ;) |
![]() ![]() Remind me to never read your stories again. I see so much favorism for Shampoo or Ukyou. It sort of make me sick. When did Shampoo become all of a sudden so perceptive? If her hair wasn't purple color, I would have suspect it would be blond, regardless of her race. Heck, who heard of purple hair? Likely, she have dyed it. Anyway, I think she's a bimbo, and I don't think she had a brain. And for her to have a decent conversation with Ranma? And you have him sleep with the slut? Yuck! No harsh feeling, just don't like your ideas. |
![]() ![]() Disgustingly, wonderfully perverse satire. I loved every minute of it. Nice writing style, too. Dry, and under-stated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, you are smokin some strange stuff. Where can I get some? ) But seriously, this is very good. Fascinating stuff. |