one word: Beautiful

The ending does not suck... no no no.. It was really nice... yes,it was! *nods head ethusiastcly* hehe I love it.. It was very... u know...just very nice, sweet.. a simple thing that can become much more special with just another adding of someone there which I know ur story TOLD IT OUT LOUD but it was just SO GOOD there.. hmm doesn't make sense doesn't it? well, WRITE MORE NE?

It was odd... the ending, yes... but it kinda fit with the oddities of the rest of the fic.

I loved their relationship here. It was... kinda sad how detached it was, even though they were so closed... but I LOVED Hisoka's reactions, how he nuzzled against Tsuzuki and all that... totally adored that.

... i don't know whether to cry or squeal like a rabid fan. this iswarm and confusing... does that make any sense at all? feh. it is the vague good sort of feeling that you cannot fully comprehend without ruining it... ;; good stuff.

what sucked about it...? I'm a romantic at heart and i loved it, even if i'm a regular tatxtsu freak... this is allowed simply on the basis of being so CUTE!

What are you talking about *smacks you upside the head*, that was beautiful! Such sweet, sweet fluff needs a shrine or something.

XD I love it! Although... when Tsuzuki offered Hisoka the sunrise I kept thinking about Mufasa and Simba in The Lion King. . Mufasa! Why'd he have to die *sob*

Stupendous, keep up the great work

So finally at Hisoka's birthday, Tsuzuki decided to give himself fully. That's so sweet. You know, the ending was just fine. I mean, Hisoka deserves to be happy some times. After all this is his birthday right?

I loved this... it's just... *cries*

I loved it! Very beautiful, very beautifully written. But you should add more, somehow the ending doesn't seem right...

cute I liked it but the ending was...lets just say it was different *g* it was a great Hisoka b-day fic though :-) even if belated *g*

Anata no Marron-chan

I think it's lovely. _ The exploration of Hisoka's feelings is well done. The ending, yeah, could have been better, maybe... (more impact or something?) but it's not bad the way it is. I thought it a bit abrupt at first, but as I re-read it I found that Hisoka's last response was actually a re-emphasis of the whole theme, so it really does conclude the fic quite befittingly.

That was beautiful! Gorgeous! I can't find the word to describe it exactly...But it certainly is very beautiful...I'm shocked into silence...Can't seem to speak anymore...

that was sweet...my kitty liked it too, but he left once I reviewed it.

That was so beautiful and sweet! *hugs both of them* They are so adorabl. E

WRITE MORE SOON! PLEASE!