Reviews for The Mating Game |
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Jen chapter 1 . 4/18 I really enjoyed this story. I really liked how Snape was with this family. |
Claude Amelia Song chapter 5 . 4/15 I love this story! This chapter made me smile so much. I love it. |
lilsis15 chapter 23 . 7/2/2019 Great story, very well written. |
Annon chapter 5 . 12/16/2018 I love that Snape had his house elf respond to his proposals. It was very funny and perfectly wriiten. |
RockfordGirl26 chapter 1 . 12/4/2018 I absolutely love this story! Great job! |
jenkent chapter 23 . 8/22/2018 When I started this story, I thought it would be close to the marriage law stories I've read, I was wrong. You took a very unique spin. I enjoyed it very much. Some of it was hard to read since my husband and I are still in the trying phase of starting a family, but I think that's also what made me like it. It was fiction but had the heart of true stories in it. I hope that makes sense. Anyway, great job and sorry for my rambling. |
Guest chapter 23 . 6/17/2018 Thank you for sharing this beautiful story. |
Bmxknsl chapter 14 . 8/28/2017 Honestly, I've hated hermione's attitude all through this. It's like she and Snape have switched characteristics. She's been an ass more of the time. It's saddening. |
Guest chapter 23 . 6/7/2017 Beautiful story! |
Guest chapter 23 . 5/6/2017 To much fluff. Then again i must not complain. Yet i do. There should not be a dead child and that was it. There should be 1unhappy lesbian ; 1child severely disabled ; 1really unhappy marriage with unhappy children. At least. Yet fluff. Yet, you are to good a writer to just write fluff... Then again, who am i to complain... Thank you :-) |
Guest chapter 18 . 5/6/2017 That is a good name. Thanks. :-) |
Guest chapter 17 . 5/6/2017 Yeah, sure, NOT. Minerva and Hermione and maybe Albus will care for the children at day, and Severus at night. Second, you should not name a firstborn Quintus, which is fifth son. At least call him Primus. ;-) |
Guest chapter 12 . 5/5/2017 Thank you for writing this story. It is fluffy and uh, logical :-) So i tell you: "respondez, s'il vous plait" actually does mean: "Please send an answer". i guess Draco would know that, so he would not double the sentence. See this tiny critique? It means i think the other things are great. :-) |
AiymaSnikies chapter 15 . 4/16/2017 How the he'll do toy pronounce The babies names |
wine witch chapter 23 . 2/1/2017 Nice, enjoyable story, thank you! |