Reviews for The Trouble Starts With Checkers |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i can't believe i haven't read this seth/marissa. it was brilliant(: thank you for gracing ff with this story:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story and as another reviewer rightly comnmented Seth's thoughts during the game could have happened to anyone because its a very normal situation. Really liked how you portayed Seth in the story, it was very well done. Great work, write more Seth & Marissa stories soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so sweet! You wrote it so realisitc, I could totally see it happening! I love Seth/Marissa fics.. there's just something about those two together.. This story reminded me again of why I like these two together so much. Great work! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I'm not a huge fan of this show but I like this pairing. It's kinda unique - well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() the story was really cute. the way you portrayed those two seemed natural, as if the whole thing would really happen. i always enjoy your seth/marissa fics. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, that was so sweet! It was totally believable; I could really see that scenerio happening. Also, your Seth voice is perfect and so adorable. Great fic - it reminded me why I was shipping these two when the show first started. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah. The always amusing SethMarissa scenario. When I first began writing O.C. fanfiction, SethMarissa was my main focus. It was before the show really made Summer likeable (to me, anyway) and SethMarissa was just so... quirky. And so I wrote four fics on it (my first four O.C. fics) before I was swallowed by the wonderment that is SethSummer. Reading this really makes me want to write another SethMarissa fic. Another great one! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() wonderful! |
![]() ![]() Ah, sweet. I really like how you make the Seth/Marissa romance seem natural. It really fits. Your last line was perfect. Good work! |