Reviews for Red Lightning |
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kkchick chapter 3 . 3/27/2013 i'm a serious gohan fan and this was ...um...uh ...good (tried to be clueless like gohan when he doesn't want to answer a question) but it was good |
kkchick chapter 2 . 3/27/2013 it wasn't bad |
MikaForester chapter 5 . 9/1/2006 great story! |
Chrisitina chapter 1 . 6/5/2006 urrm... write more? lol I think it's going good, but I need to read the next chapter...really, I do! |
miroku-has-darkness chapter 5 . 11/19/2005 all the chapters where good exept the 4 one and no one cares about grammer when reveiwing and not everone watches sm so if they don't know something hey you shound't inculd it in your story update soon |
miroku-has-darkness chapter 3 . 11/19/2005 acutally it just means 18 not andriod 18 |
nine miles to go chapter 1 . 8/27/2005 OMG! YOU'RE HILARIOUS! I LOVE THE TEQUILA THING WITH DENDE I LAUGHED REALLY HARD AND MY BROTHER'S ALL, "WHAT ARE YOU DOING?" lol! |
Lady Tsuru chapter 2 . 6/29/2005 Oops... That's 'Cold Night'. I forget these things; new summer job, working on college applications and all that, you know! Anyway, another great chapter! I commend you on your writing! And I'll have to check out that story 'Kokuhaku'. It sounds interesting! |
Lady Tsuru chapter 1 . 6/29/2005 Aww, poor Gohan! I will read more of this; I just don't have time... *sniff* And I'm going to read more of your stories; I'm so glad to see someone else who loves Gohan as much as I do! And thank you so much for reading my story 'Dark Night'. In case you're interested, I'm going to continue the story with more chapters. |
TheShadowPanther chapter 4 . 2/1/2004 *Cackles evilly* Muahahaha! I have you under MY mind control! MUAHAHAHAHA! :D You always were funny with bashing the characters that we ALL love to HATE. But Hercule as a Bloated Teletubby? HAHAHAHAHAH! Oh so V-chan's a hybrid Saiyan like Gohan? Coolness! *Marches around with big sign "SIMBA-RULZ WRITES COOL FICS!"* UPDATE! AAS-sama *Bows* |
CosmicTwilight chapter 3 . 1/31/2004 this is very good keep up the good work, i will definately be back again he he. You write so well, what's your secret he he i need to become a way better writer :P Will talk l8rz With Love Lunic |
thegreenpuma88 chapter 4 . 1/29/2004 Really good. Pure genuis. Yes, Gohan-chan is so cute! Please update soon! |
reader chapter 1 . 1/29/2004 WTF? your story doesnt even make sense? |
Keruseyu Baruru chapter 3 . 1/4/2004 Hi! I'm Keruseyu...Keruseyu is japanese for Kelsey...But anyway, this story is SO COOL! Please continue it! I mean, I BOOKMARKED this place! |
Chipolata chapter 3 . 12/23/2003 In response to [3]- the real name is Papaya Island Plus- you changed currancies from Dollar to Zenni from entrance fees to prize money. Other than that... :D |