Reviews for Red Lightning
kkchick chapter 3 . 3/27/2013
i'm a serious gohan fan and this was
...um...uh ...good
(tried to be clueless like gohan when he doesn't want to answer a question)
but it was good
kkchick chapter 2 . 3/27/2013
it wasn't bad
MikaForester chapter 5 . 9/1/2006
great story!
Chrisitina chapter 1 . 6/5/2006
urrm... write more? lol

I think it's going good, but I need to read the next chapter...really, I do!
miroku-has-darkness chapter 5 . 11/19/2005
all the chapters where good exept the 4 one and no one cares about grammer when reveiwing and not everone watches sm so if they don't know something hey you shound't inculd it in your story update soon
miroku-has-darkness chapter 3 . 11/19/2005
acutally it just means 18 not andriod 18
nine miles to go chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
OMG! YOU'RE HILARIOUS! I LOVE THE TEQUILA THING WITH DENDE I LAUGHED REALLY HARD AND MY BROTHER'S ALL, "WHAT ARE YOU DOING?" lol!
Lady Tsuru chapter 2 . 6/29/2005
Oops... That's 'Cold Night'. I forget these things; new summer job, working on college applications and all that, you know! Anyway, another great chapter! I commend you on your writing!

And I'll have to check out that story 'Kokuhaku'. It sounds interesting!
Lady Tsuru chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
Aww, poor Gohan! I will read more of this; I just don't have time... *sniff* And I'm going to read more of your stories; I'm so glad to see someone else who loves Gohan as much as I do!

And thank you so much for reading my story 'Dark Night'. In case you're interested, I'm going to continue the story with more chapters.
TheShadowPanther chapter 4 . 2/1/2004
*Cackles evilly* Muahahaha! I have you under MY mind control! MUAHAHAHAHA! :D
You always were funny with bashing the characters that we ALL love to HATE. But Hercule as a Bloated Teletubby? HAHAHAHAHAH!
Oh so V-chan's a hybrid Saiyan like Gohan? Coolness! *Marches around with big sign "SIMBA-RULZ WRITES COOL FICS!"*
UPDATE!
AAS-sama *Bows*
CosmicTwilight chapter 3 . 1/31/2004
this is very good keep up the good work, i will definately be back again he he. You write so well, what's your secret he he i need to become a way better writer :P
Will talk l8rz
With Love Lunic
thegreenpuma88 chapter 4 . 1/29/2004
Really good. Pure genuis. Yes, Gohan-chan is so cute! Please update soon!
reader chapter 1 . 1/29/2004
WTF? your story doesnt even make sense?
Keruseyu Baruru chapter 3 . 1/4/2004
Hi! I'm Keruseyu...Keruseyu is japanese for Kelsey...But anyway, this story is SO COOL! Please continue it! I mean, I BOOKMARKED this place!
Chipolata chapter 3 . 12/23/2003
In response to [3]- the real name is Papaya Island
Plus- you changed currancies from Dollar to Zenni from entrance fees to prize money.
Other than that... :D
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