Ah, so that was what was going on. Nice end to a nice story. I enjoyed all paralells to Riddle's diary (a student died; muggle paperback book; a tall, dark-haired boy... you had me speculating for a moment). I must say that Clovis was a young man of high moral standing. Just imagine all the abuse he could have done with the book, but chose not to.

And Ron will always be Ron.

A vile object indeed; and of course, another muggle notebook comes to mind. A very Dumbledorian aproach to the problem. Highly intruiging story.

Highly enjoyable to see how the students spent their time waiting for Harry to wake up. Very much Fred and George style firework.

Oh! I think I start to realize what you are getting at. Well, Harry shouldn't be surprised. All good stories change when they are retold. But I must say that this is far more than a making fun of differences in movies and book. This is a good story in it's own right. Let's se how it will change, once retold.

Dudley is being his normal, charming bully self, and Harry his normal, miserable, sarcastic orphan self; but something is very wrong with the background scenery. I and Harry will have to find out together.

This is such a clever little essay! Very enjoyable!

i don't get it. sorry.

The story was good up until the resolution of the mystery. It was too clean and kinda lacked any drama, which was a little disappointing as it was an excellent premise.

Ah, what can I say? Excellent.
Do you strictly consign all your work to the Net, or do you have work in print as well?

Hehe. I like the way you put the movie events in. Great fun to read. Well written as well. Thanks for a read.