this was good it was cool so far keep up the good work dude

Interesting, I think they are about the same age, so this could work. Though it wouldn't explain the fallout... Hopefully you'll keep it up, way too short and I wanna see where this is heading.

Very smooth and flowing!

I've never seen the show but it's obvious they are great friends. Good job :)

This is really good. It's enjoyable reading.

Whoo, Boomtown fic! I hope you continue this- it should be interesting to see how you begin to form the relationship between the two men- especially if you went beyond the academy to see their initial reactions to each other's partners (ie, Joel's to Ray, Tom's to Fearless). Any way you go though, I'm reading!