Good story. I'm working on a crossover so if you have time check it out if you want.

I have 5 things I need to ask you about this fanfic. 1. What is this fanfic's plot? 2. When does it take place? 3. Any certain ages for those in this fanfic? 4. Just how far did Teamo Supremo get in superhero duties and protecting the state? 5. What was going on when this fanfic started? Be sure to answer these questions. And I will have some more questions to ask you to answer later.

I have 5 things I need to ask you about this fanfic. 1. What is this fanfic's plot? 2. When does it take place? 3. Any certain ages for those in this fanfic? 4. Just how far did Teamo Supremo get in superhero duties and protecting the state? 5. What was going on when this fanfic started? Be sure to answer these questions. And I will have some more questions to ask you to answer later.

Ouchie-bubba! Yep, that is one downright scary situation the heroes find themselves in. I'll definitely be curious as to how they manage to get out of that mess. You are doing a terrific job on building up the drama. Keep up the great work.

Aw come on. I loved the opening action AND the introductions to the Nega-Teamo. So far, my only complaint about this this story is the fact you are taking so blasted long with it. I'm EXTREMELY curious as to see the Nega-Crandall AND the Negaversions of the Teamo villains (at least the Negaversions still among the living). In short, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE continue.

Um, excusse me! I came up with the character designies! You came up with the personas, though, I'll give credit where credit is definitely due. (Unlike you, hmph.) You should really get around to uploading everything else, ya know!

Perfect Cory style here in this chapter. But I'm writing this too, so it's kinda hard to review my own story. I do like the battle scene, though. But I wish Baron Blitz had said something more near the end. );;

carry on great writeing