Reviews for Birthday Surprises
Romily chapter 23 . 5/24
I really tried - but i am out of here now. The story is just too dialogue driven for me. All the characters do are just being somewhere or going somewhere and talk nonstop.
I still can’t connect with the characters and when you start hoping the DE show up and kill them all it’s time to leave.
Romily chapter 9 . 5/24
I really hope this gets better soon. So far the story is about 90% dialog and i didn’t get a chance to connect to the characters.
I rarely find a story that is so distant from the reader. I am going to give it another chance for some chapters - but so far i am really bored and not invested at all to learn who the triplets are, how Harry is going to save the world etc.
Emily Frode chapter 5 . 5/6
This is nice, so far.
Lovetoright chapter 50 . 5/5
I love this story. I’ve only read it twenty times and it’s amazing. I have found one thing I dislike and a constant spelling error. It’s hiccuping not hiccoughing. Also the chapters are really short and you have a lot of them. You should combine some chapters to make them longer and less abundant
femPortugal chapter 13 . 3/9
Whyyyyyyy, why cant I use the read aloud option correctly in these chapters, it's so infuriating
jmw03u chapter 76 . 1/23
A very cute story. Thank you for writing this.
lmao chapter 75 . 10/28/2019
I thought the ending would be more anti-climatic lmao
rowenasheir chapter 76 . 7/29/2019
Arthur for minister? I would like Madam Bones!
spnfan2005 chapter 23 . 6/24/2019
love it please write more
Deet chapter 76 . 2/28/2019
I absolutely LOVED reading this. Great job!
AvideReader99220 chapter 1 . 2/20/2019
Your version of harry is either a saint, a masochist of insane. He gets told his DNA was taken, without his consent which im sure if he went public with that shit the ministry would burn because lets face it purebloods the way they are they would pour oil on the ministry and light the match if they found out the ministry could basically commit line theft like that, and he what? just goes up to them and says "im your daddy" with minimal time being angry, NOT FOR HIMSELF, but for the kids whose sole purpose would be to be weapons against voldemort, and a bit of anger for the mother. Plus i call bullshit on Dumbledore not being able to overturn or stop the ministry from doing that, i bet it was twofold, a way to control harry and his actions, and possibly he felt his personal effort to fight it wouldnt be worth the time.
Asilrettor chapter 76 . 1/31/2019
This is such a sweet story I love it
BlazeStryker chapter 63 . 10/30/2018
%&*%%&*$%&*$%%&*#$%*#$%*I(% him.
E$%$%U*%&&*O&*(P*()_{*){*)_{*)*)&*(& Albus for hiring him.
&*%&(&*(&*()&*()P*&()_*()_{*()_*()_()**()$ Hogwarts for letting him in the damn wards.
Nonces chapter 2 . 10/17/2018
There is iust so many things that are wrong in this. First if all, who accepts babies like 'Hmm yes this is fine' no-one literally does that. And second of all, he doesn't even ask about the parents And THIRD of all when did suddenly Petunia become so nice and all. It was canon before this right? So it was a very unlike that she reakted that way.
Alicia Janae Alexander chapter 76 . 9/18/2018
It was so good
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