Just remembered this, you described marvolo as a Python. So far as I know pythons are not of Constrictor status but rather Venomous Snakes. If I am wrong I apologize, but I remember you mentioned him keeping his coils loose and got a bit confused.

Love this story when can we see the next chapter of it I can't wait to find out what happens next

Looks like you did abandon the story

Whoa. I was about to read this fic but then I read the latest comments. Prejudiced, much? How hoity toity. Oink. Oink. Are these notions really still a thing? Hypocrisy knows no limits. Get your facts straight, you ignorant trash. How is the Dow Jones going now? Going on a downward slope. Where are these jobs Trump promised? Outside the US, being outsourced for cheaper labor.

So what exactly is this fanfic doing in the Dark Slytherin/Independent Harry community?

The Dursley's are actually how most liberals are when it comes to practicing what they preach. They just have stupid voters running around acting like Gryffindor idiots for them and they laugh their way to the bank.

They believe in spending money as long as it's someone else's not theirs. Trump he has paid for everything on his own. When his campaign speech limits ended he paid out of his pocket for more air time not being backed by any sponsors. Hillary had all the big name corporations under her thumb protecting her and she still lost! BTW: Construction of the (wall) is being built now but you won't hear this from MSM press.

The Democratic Party is literally eating itself alive. They are turning on each other. As the old saying goes a house divided cannot stand. Satan cannot cast out Satan without being divided against himself.

Your going the correct route here. God made us two. Man and women. No amount of voodoo science or DNA manipulation can change what God made. In fact if anything we are the fools if we think we can fool our creator. There is LOTS of evidence mathematically that there is a creator and our DNA has the Hebrew code in it but most of your school taught lies come from communism and that links back to Cain and Abel which all the world religions do.

I'M HOOKED! ADD MORE PLEASE! I LOVE IT!

I felt like i was reading a poem.

Oi post again this is my favorite story ever

Have one of them false propose to the other for marriage in the great hall while wearing banana costumes and rabbit ears, now where is my chocolate covered SeverusXDD

Doesn't A mean acceptable in the books

He would not be in any house he is to stupid for Ravenclaw, no cunning or ambition so not Slytherin, to lazy for Hufflepuff, and he is a coward s not Griffindor

Interesting so far

I refuse to read any further. Your "Krista" is a straight up Mary-sue. She is married to Sirius and is loved by Severus because she is super beautiful. She is the twin sister of Remus. Then she had a powerful position within Voldemorts army but did not have a dark mark. So in conclusion she is loved by the main characters for no discernable reason and is powerful, enough to change the story. Classic Mary-sue and I expected to read a Slytherin Harry Potter story.