Just wonderful. This verse should not be abandoned; it's far too funny to be ignored.

he shouldn't leave his house with drunk people in it,they might set something on fire! XD

wow awesome story! you are great author. and the characters are as canon as possible I loved the story. It was very VERY funny at times ;) cool I loved it

~Shana

That was really funny! and i'm talking about the whole thing.

hey, where's the rest of it?

i love the story. i love it, just plainly love it *adds it too book marks* cause i cant remember my ff acount thingy! -

I just read "Just Because" and needed more of your writing, so I was looking for more Furuba - the only manga I understand - and figured that my obsession with Norse myths might get me through this. I was right. Even without the manga (or, I gather, the anime - there is an anime?) this was perfectly comprehensible and highly enjoyable. I loved it to little bits! The last chapter was kind of apathetic-seeming, but the first and, somehow, the notes, were side-splitting. I like you. Got the slapstick and the sarcasm. Very nice.

I have two things to say to you.

One:*squeals in delight for such a funny story!*

Two:Update soon!

I absolutely love your characterization in this fic. Pure genius. The snarky bits between Heimdall and Loki were awesome, I could easily see this happening. Great fic!

hello. i'll keep this short. i love your fics. please write more for maloki.

I couldn't stop laughing! It was beautifully funny, and very well done. The ending was dissappointing, but overall I love the fic to pieces!

To say you are a bloody genius would be an understatement. This is ... MARVELOUS. I love it. (And I'm also a biased Heimdall x Loki fan) Your writing has a satirical (I do hope I've spelled that correctly) humor that makes you shudder incontrollaby of laughter and fall ungracefully from your chair. I worship you. *melodramatic sigh* If only this was a multi-chapter story... *puts on favorite stories*

LMFAO. XDXDXD ILOVETHISFIC! WAAH

*falls to knees*

*worships*

*bookmarks and saves just in case* Keep writing. X3

This is very amusing. XD The first MLR fic I read, and it's awesome! Heh, I love how you keep them IC for the entire fic. Please write more soon!
~firedraygon97

I beg you, BEG YOU to make another fic like this. The Loki/heimdall is just to cute...I love the Omakes! (at least the 1st and the 3rd). Please keep writing!