LOVE IT!But...this is still going to be Hatori/Akito right?

firefly12

I want more! GIVE ME MORE! I MUST AHVE MORE! ~nice now~ Plz write more!

You are one very gifted writer. Your fic made me fall in love with Hatori/Akito. You write their relationship in such a dark but intriguing way that I now cannot see it any other way. (No doubt, this is my favorite Fruits Basket fic. I've read some of your FMA and Prince of Tennis fics and they are no less talented.)

The first two chapters were beautifully written and very solid. The new introduction with Momiji in chapters 3 and 4 confused me, and it's disappointing that you've closed the fic with this open end: the current situation demands further development and resolution. I really want to see how you can spin off this new angle.

I Love You! I love this story! Not a lot of people write about the evil Akito and i'm so glad you did! I love this so totally! PLEase! PLEASE! Update soon! i wanna read more! I alos read your Music without words and it was very beautiful! I like your FruBa stuff!

Oh... I like this a lot. I can see this happening. The way Akito acted about the whole Kana thing reminded me of a jilted lover. And Hatori never blaming Akito for the injury. I like the whole obsessive thing. Disturbing yet... kind of sweet. O_o

That wqas good u know continue!

Oh...sorry for not reading this chapter sooner! ;.; I didn't know you'd posted! It's so good! Very unexpected one-sided couple, but you know it makes sense. Good work! It's beautifully written and I love it!

*cringes slightly* Momiji Hatori... maybe that bugs me cause I think Momiji is obnoxious? I dunno. Even though its disturbing me slightly, can't wait for the next chappy!

oh the tie scene...that disturbed me in so many ways...i think this is now that i have read your fics a ok couple. i dont know what you got ploted but hey i think i like it

_ Amazing fic, just AMAZING! I love this couple so much! It's the first one I've seen on (aside from one I wrote, but that doesn't much count) Anyway, great job, I love the scenes although it was kind of confusing at times. But good job!

yay... new chapter new chapter... -

I will never hear Momiji say "I really like him" about Hari in the same light again. Your stories have yet to dissapoint!

o_o Wow, that last part literally made my eyes pop open and exhale. It was so...Shocking! So far so good! _ You go, chicka!

it's getting better and better :)

wowowowow, It's creeping me out and I'm loving it at the same time. Your writing style is incredible.

""You're in love with the devil..." Shigure told him on the phone with a laugh.

He had replied, "To each his own damnation.""

that line is gold , update soon please!