wow. good story. poor dawn. poor SPIKE! buffy's a bit of a bitc# in this one. i can't believe you made her stake spike!

wow, powerful. amazing. scary. very sad. and very powerful. almost made me cary, not thatt hats hard to do. but treally it was incredible. just so amazign. its on my faves list.

Wow, this is one harsh story. I'd leave a longer review but they're shutting off the computers here.

Wow. This was depressing. It was a good telling of what might have been... There were just two things you have to fix. Twice you wrote "but" instead of "bot." It's confusing. Also, Dawn refered to Willow as "Red." She wouldn't have done that. As far as we've seen, Dawn's never used a nickname for any of the characters. Other than that, good job.

Once again lovely creepiness.