Please continue if you motivation left this is get really interesting

CONTINUE PLEASE! I HATE SUSPENCE!

well you got it right ra is god of the sun im positive on that keep doing amazing fan fics thanks shout out to sugar child awsome anzu bashing i get star eyes when i eat sugar lol

Seriously? It's been forever! WHEN WILL YOU UPDATE?

writ more please :3

Cool I can't wait for next chapter

Y u no update this one? This is a REALLY REALLY good story! I love the idea of it! Maybe you could watch some old episodes of Yugioh (in Japanese of course) and maybe finish this fic? That would be awesome! If not that's okay I guess...Pweeze finish it! T-T

*poke* ES BEEN YEARS! PLEASE UPDATE!

I can understand alternative universes, but wow, this feels like this same story could belong to any cast; pokemon, clannad, beyblade which could be just replaced to perform exactly the same roles. Give or take.

The way you describe the main character is almost like fangirl service. I know it's a different setting and all, but it's annoying to read nonetheless.

Lastly, please lose the author's note in the middle of the story; you already write enough author notes at the beginning and the end, having your 'musings' in between paragraphs is a pain.

Don't take this as a flame, this is criticism. Whether you listen to this is up to you.

your continueing right? right? right? its been like 2 or 3 yrs since you last updated!. the story!

Awesome fanfiction!I love the plot, it is so unique! Ice and fire falling for one another? The idea is super cute and original!.The only thing that kind of confused me is how did Yugi blush when he needs the cold?

Please update soon,okay?

*Drools* Yami goes comando! *Fangirl shriek* I worship this story! Please update soon!

Ee! This is so good, please continue it soon!

your brilliant.

me love dis story

pls pls pls update soon

Update Plz!