aw I can find words to descride your one-shot

I love it

That was so well done! I'm sad but happy at the same time.

okay. another review that is one year and two months late, but who cares. I loved it. And thats all I can say!

I loved it.. It was sad but where there is death their is always life...

Wow... It was so pretty. Your use of words was beautiful. *sniffle* I like. *nodnod*

Prickly feeling all over my body from that one. Cool. Aww man, now I'm freezing, it was that good. I almost cried.

Bravo! That was deeply moving. A very well written story. You made me cry though! Anyways, good job! And thank you for reading my story.

so...what exactly did she die from? That was strange, and almost too stream of consciousness to follow...

Nice. Very original way of re-connecting Chihiro and Haku, and the whole format of the story was well done. Merely alluding to Chihiro's illness instead of going into heavy detail over it was very effective, and the story was nicely paced. The one major critique I have is that you often changed tenses, something that was quite jarring. For example: 'I can feel the wind whipping through my hair as I ran' should be either 'can' and 'run' or 'could' and 'ran'. But overall, an interesting read.

*sniffle* This was well done. *sigh* it also makes sense as to why Kohaku would not have been able to visit her... though that is sort of depressing. Any way good job, be proud.

oh please continue! so sad and sweet