Reviews for Through Another's Eyes |
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Guest chapter 14 . 12/6/2019 It's good I guess |
neodelta01hotmail.com chapter 20 . 1/6/2019 excellent story I hope you continue it its really good don't listen to the flamers |
Red8404 chapter 5 . 1/14/2018 I just had to stop. Thought I could get through it but no. You seriously need a beta reader to check and fix all of this crap. And you do know that you can go a chapter without your stupid little side notes to the reader. It's actually seems a little childish. But this whole story seems to be childish so either fix the problems like spelling or just stop all together and become a janitor or something. |
RWBY LVR chapter 3 . 10/6/2014 cool |
RWBY LVR chapter 2 . 10/6/2014 AWESOME Really weird |
god of all chapter 20 . 6/24/2012 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
5HAD0W chapter 5 . 3/30/2012 Yano i was really getting in to this but then you keep on adding in your own comments and its realy distracting. Its been a while so you might wanna think of redoing this cos it has potential... |
Dark Neko 4000 chapter 1 . 9/23/2009 wat going to happen in chapters 21 and up |
Lilly chapter 20 . 5/17/2009 Okay, really just finish the story. I hate when a story goes unfinished. If you don't want to go into intense detail, just tell everyone what you had intend to happen. At least then it will have a sort of ending. |
gfeh chapter 20 . 1/9/2009 this sucks! glad you stopped writing! you should take it down alothgether! |
Sonia120462 chapter 20 . 8/29/2008 lol...update! |
laura chapter 20 . 4/14/2008 argh update now , please , its soo good i can't stand the wait any longer quick or i will go completely mental |
TJ chapter 1 . 7/12/2007 It's a good plot, but you seriously need a Beta Reader. There were a lot of mistakes. Also, make the chapters longer. |
granger-malfoy chapter 20 . 6/27/2007 i love this story neva read one like it b4 caryy on. Update soon im dieing to read the rest |
Hazel-Buttafly chapter 20 . 7/16/2006 UPDATE ASAP! Hazel-Buttafly |