OK... That was cool. Bit abrupt ending, but good

Lol wow. Funny & cute.

That was good. I really liked the wasy Jack handeled Elizabeth. Good for this ines going in my fav. Stories..and you in my fave authors,

*Chortles* Love it! Seems the poor lass made a mistake in her choice of revenge, though. Unless she guessed, I suppose... :)

Very quirky and humorous. I loved it. Keep writing, darling.

Who. Great stuff.
The rum is *intentionally* gone? But WHY? ;)

Loved it. Hah, ok, I love pretty much any Jack/Will slash, they're GREAT together!
A bit choppy, but overall good. I liked how you had an actual PLOT (lol like one time I read this story and it started, told, and ended with all about jack and will having sex once, and it was just all their actions it was like, "this is pretty stupid") so you actually kept it interesting. Good job.

I swear,I just was going through my favorites and I stumbled on this story and i re read it and by golly geesh it never gets old i love it and i just want to reiterate that fact. tata

hey, no offence, but this fic could be way better. Get a plot, some detail, and HOLY SHIT CHILD! WRITE SOMETHING OTHER THAN SEX SENCES! It's kinda obvious that's the only reason you wrote the fic... Also, it's just not well written... even the opening line is weak, and that's one of the most important parts of any written work! Like i said before, this has basically no plot what-so-ever, and even though that can be good at some times, this isn't one of those times. I'm not trying to be mean, just helpful. I really hate to see people who write, not use their full potential. Also, write slower. Let things happen in a more flowing way. the way you wrote this is so choppy, and it had absolutly no detail. I am quite sorry if you feel any offence from this review, but i speak/write to you only the truth! If you ever plan to write anything else, please take all i have said into consideration! (ps, I'd leave an email or something, but i have absolutle no way for people to contact me via the internet... so sorry if you though i apeared cowerdly) Fare-thee-well dear Tuuli!

*luaghs* that was cute!

(Tuuli 2003-11-01 1 Signed
Just a few suggestions, *my dear*:
1) Learn to spell.
2) Learn to speak English.
3) Get a beta.
4) MAKE AN EFFORT.
Yes, this is very much a flame. It's a signed one, so if you want to bitch to me, e-mail me.)
SUCKS! I think you try the last of what you told someone else for yourself my dear, Any one who review any of this writers work must be shown that she is a flamer who all writers detests.
I suggest to anyone who is reading this story if you want to go find other writers who would not stoop low as to flame a person as this so called writer just said in her post to another writers story did.

Don't even know how to respond to that...Should I give ye a nolbel prize or the funkey round, golden circle best authors git? Damn, that was a great story. Sorry if me first line there was misleadin, trust me I mean it with nought a bad intention... um it wasn't bad, quite the opposite really, bloody brilliant. Damn, I keep seeming to dig meself in a hole huh? Well here...
BEST DAMN STORY EVER! _~
That should do it...

O.o funky!

Great first chapter! Really interesting, quite funny, well, I thought it was funny.

Write more!

_~

DreamWeaver

LOL! That was so cool!

I liked it! If only you had written more :P I think I kind of like this pairing... this is my first exposure to Jack/Will slash, you see.

Yeah- I LIKE IT!

Fearuin