How does Sano know Satan/ he become a Christian?!

WHAT!? this is your first fanfic, but... it was to good to have been your first!

that was great cant wait to read the next chapter

its a really good fic, and i really enjoyed reading it. the storyline was fun and sweet and the writing style was consistent. the only thing i would say to bear in mind is that sometimes its best to put all your authors notes at the top or the bottom, as it can bring the reader back to reality with a sharp bump if you put one in bracketts in the middle. other than that, it was really enjoyable!

Very good story! Good work !(despite some grammar mistakes)

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wow, that was a really great story! i loved it.

I wish I had a fanfic writing family like yours... Alas, I'm just lonely Sirius Lupin... My bro's not the least bit interested in writing!

Cute story though I have to comment that the names of the characters were misspelled thorughout the story. Kaoru and Saito specifically.

The story was very cute though. Nice and fluffy. It's exactly what I needed after my horrible month. Ja ne!

the story was amazing its like the perfect ending.

hey im not done reading it just yet but so far im loveing it!not to mention i am i huge kk fan!

i love you story.A very good ending, I hope that you will right more story like this with more long chapter.

Lady himura, I love this story almost as much as I love Kenshin i loved this fic!

OMG!I LOVE IT!

Ohmigod I love your storys, that I do. Plz write more I allready read your other one and I think you should do more.

From yours etc: Mori'quessir