First of all I would like to critique your work. It is well written but there are many wrongs spellings here and there. You also got some spells wrong such as Crucio, when it should be Avada Kedavra, if you're really intending the spell to be the killing curse. Crucio is the spell that induce pain to those who will be hit, commonly used for torture. The incantation for the Bogart banishing spell was also wrong. It should be Riddikulus instead. There are also some conversations I found weird for the characters to say: 1) It's right that Ni Hao means hello in Chinese but I found it weird when you used it for Tomoyo. 2) When the girls found the boys' room locked, Hermione could've used Alohamora to unlock it so I found it weird when you made her wish she could do what Sakura have done to unlock the door. 3) Although I understand you want variations because this is a fanfic and by all means should be as unique as it could get, I just want to state that Syaoran doesn't call Sakura with -chan, just plain Sakura. 4) Again by the same reason as no. 3. It's no big deal but I just wanted to state that Harry would shorten Hermione's name bymione" instead of Hermy. You also got one card fact wrong. If there is one card that Tomoyo could've have been afraid off, it should be The Voice, because The Voice is the one who stole Tomoyo's voice as well as others' voices, not The Silent. Your story has lots of potentials and has a very good plot but there are always room for improvementsI hope you'll get the time you need to revise your work and by then it will be perfect! Good job and thanks for sharing your awesome work with us :D

I keep cringing whenever Syaoran calls Sakura his lover oh god I don't know why

Is it just me or are you creating cards? Like the move card does it actually exist?

Please stop with the kissing your ruining my innocent couple

WHAT ABOUT ROMIONE AND HINNY?!

Stupid English wizards. Li is his last name

"Ni hao" Chinese "Hello"

Of course, only makes sense coming from Li-kun, given he's Chinese.

It would be nice to reunite with loved ones

Oh... GO TOmoyo-chan

WOW! At least this chapter makes up for the wrong infos _ Good job!

Dear, I don't want to be rude or do anything that will make you sad but I want to be honest with you... Your story is interesting and I like it. It actually has a plot that is not empty and meaningless like most fanfics I've read, that's why I didn't discontinue reading this yet BUT, you have lots of wrong information and spelling in here that I just couldn't resist to correct. Sorry if I'm being hard but... It really irritates me. :( *sigh* Syaoran and Eriol are being OOCs too...

Those wrong information I'm talking about are:

First, Hogwarts is in Scotland and not England. Second, the incantation is wrong, it should be Riddikulus. Third, The card is called "The Nothing" and I don't really understand why you kept saying The Emptiness. Fourth, the card who stole Tomoyo's voice is The Voice card not The Silent... The Silent didn't even have that skill because all The Silent could do is teleport someone or something that is noisy to a place far from it... and please dear, It's alright to use Japanese language (well actually it's good because it helps in making the character intact and just like their original selves) but refrain from using Japanese words that doesn't fit in the sentence or Japanese words that you don't know how to use or spell correctly.

Sorry about this... I just couldn't keep my thoughts shut. I hope you won't view this in a bad way.

Sincerely,
VongolaJuudaimeHime

Hogwarts is in Scotland

Who are the two enchantress?

poor Skaura-chan :( *sniff*

Ready! _