very nice written

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Bittersweet, but I loved it. :D

So short and sweet. Sad that it isn't long. Well written, though. Nicely done.

This story is beautiful in a weird way. Even though Sasuke never came back, atleast he got to revive his clan... It's very well written and you're a good write.

sad,yet awesome! i loved it!

i felt like reading one of the stories form the last page and i'll glad i picked this one C

This was so deep and emotional. I think you portrayed each character perfectly.

Of course, Sasuke would not want to live in a world where Itachi could come and take away his family at any given moment, and of course Sasuke has felt care for Sakura, his female teammate, and he would feel the love when they had that special night.

With Sakura, I thought that you got her right on, because I don't think she would have burst out into tears or try to stalk him again, but she would know that he'd come back to her and she knew that nothing would stop him until he knew that they were all safe.

I especially loved how you added in the image of Sasuke and Sakura's baby boy, and then the second image of a little girl.

This was a great story, and I think that this revision was perfect

sadness! but it was good!

Great job. :]

Although I didn't read the original so I can't say anything about how much better or worse it is. But I liked it a lot.

Beautifully written.

Your a really good writer.

Good job]

Nice. I like the feeling you created with the story. Very articulate. Good job.

The ending was perfect! Great job.

wow you could totaly carry that on and alland i'm sad that u may not cos i won't to read anouther chapter to that o well wiced story bye