*that was so GREAT!*

i was kinda thinking on how Ryuichi would say that he's been

"stalking"(i know he wasn't really stalking him) tatsuha since their 1st encounter.,hehehe

anyway that awsome!

so it WAS ryuichi he admired for so long.,

kinda feel sorry for tohma.,but i guess he has mika?

,.,anyway i'm enjoying this story much more now!

you did a great job.,.but i still don't know the ending.,so

ok i gotta read the rest now.,.,

i realized something.,its nothing really.,,.

its just that tohma and ryuichi kinda act like yuki and shuichi

but i know not as lovers.,.,anyway i'm looking forward to what will happen between ryu-kun and tatsuha.,.,hehehe next up

chapter 13.,,

THAT PROBABLY WAS TATSUHA'S FIRST KISS!

this is so sad you know, I loved it, too much!...

i'm crying dear god, XD

Hello! Just wanted to say you seem like a really great writer and the chapters that I read were very interesting. Unfortunately my brain cannot read fiction written in first person but if you ever experiment with writing in third person I'd love to read the fic :).

darn my brain from tripping me up, I really really like this pairing and your story The characterization and idea was absorbing. bye now :)

Wow. This was so, so, so good. You are such an amazing writer! I don't even know what to say to show how much I loved this... Poor Ryuichi..I could identify with this, I've had an anxiety disorder before. Your writing is incredible, don't stop writing!

This is honestly one of the best stories I have ever read. I'm being totally serious here, this story is amazing. The work you put into it really shows, in fact, it shines!

And that you did it from Ryuichi's point of view just astounds me! So few people even try to write for him since he's such a complicated character, but you did such a wonderful job! I've been sitting here for two hours and I haven't been able to tear myself away!

Needless to say, I'm adding this to my favs list. Keep up the awesome work!

-Dazma

1/3? Haven't heard of it, and Kenshin is my favorite all-time anime. Neways, I really like your story. TatsuRyu pairing and a TohmaRyu pairing in the same fic! Great! Now I just have to find the fic after this once i finish this one. _~

hey yui. its me again, i had to rush off yesterday, but now im back. your story was very good. so very full of feeling. the story itself was very well written. it flowed from one concept to another and all the while keeping to the big picture. the entire structure is so complex and yet at the same time so obviously simple. the one thing about this story that really strikes me though is the fact that the charcters develope. they change throughout the entire story, and yet so smoothly that it seems almost natural. i just wanted to tell you this and well, congradulate (is that misspelled?)you on all tour work. (i have read other pieces, but just didnt review.) -

hey yui. this story practically made me cry. it was just so good. it was just so filled with feeling. got to go now will write more later bye

hi! i actually finished reading ur fic about 2 weeks ago and i send u an e-mail about that time as well, i don't know if u got it? but i mentioned on it that i didn't want to read this fic without certain knowledge, but i crumbled and went right ahead and read it! which i'm really glad that i did - i don't have words to describe this fic just that IS THE BEST FIC EVER! u put so much feelings in word and the characters are well portrayed! just wanted to congratulated u for such a formidable story! ) i already read most of the nagareboshi series i really liked that u put all of ryuichi's POV in one magnificent fic! i just need to read the 3rd part in the series, the one with tatsuha's POV! hopefully in that fic i will discover wether or not ryuichi told tatsuha everything! well then i guess now i'm off to read the one that i'm missing! well just one thing left to say: U are a GREAT WRITER!o take care .ag..bytes!\

The content of this whole series really stays with me. You have done such a terrific job of capturing the characters and staying within the parameters of the established, official Gravitation material so that your work makes a very credible, believable continuation.
Mechanically, I think you break up and separate words and thoughts too much. I find paragraph blocks easier to read. The heart and thoughtfulness of the work easily makes up for imperfect spelling and grammar.
I highly recommend all of your Nagareboshi series to all Gravitation fans. Kudos for all your hard work. I shall continue to watch for future fics from you! Thank you for writing!

This is wicked very powerful - very beautiful!
be safe
-BG

oh! i like it a lot
i'll read more later - it's so late here - gotta get some sleep -;
be safe
-BG

thank you thank you thank you! this is the best most sweetest story I have ever read about ryu-chan and tat-chan!thank you thankyou thank you for writing it!