This is too good to abandon!

mmm... good chapter I enjoyed it. But Inuyasha was a real asshole. Anyway, I'd love to read more. Please update! :)

please write more

What the hell... that's the end?!

RIGHT MORE !

this is really a great story i like it i hope you can finish revising soon and update. PWEEEASE *puppy dog eyes*

Loved it. Please continue!

No way! My friend and i happened to be looking back at old fanfics we liked and i found the first 3 chapters of this printed out, then i came back here to see if you ever finished but you just took the rest down 2 months ago!

So close man! lol

Well i can't wait until you repost it. Sad to hear about the rude prickly buttmunchers. :]

so are you going to continue the story?

Hey :)

Im srry 2 hear that you've been getting lots of negative comments. I hope it doesn't get to you- remember, you should feel free to do what you like (love? I personally LOVE writing) and maybe you should use grammar check on your computer if its a problem? Anyhow, I'm glad you've decided to continue and edit, and so on. So anyhow, ja ne, and i'll hear from you soon?

~Nyony's Echo

I like this story. Whoever doesn't doesn't have a fucking personality and i'd like to see their stories! Oh yeah and update!

Dude, you're totally confusing me. The names keep changing: their MSN names and then Kagome's name that she told him. Fist, it was Rebecca and now it's Rachael... I'm confused so can you go back and edit and keep the consistancy?

if i were you i would finish this story...but i'm not...OF COURSE I'M MAD AT YOU!

this sucks! Why aren't you continuing? This ruined my day

you brocke me :(

? do you do this to me i'me sad now :-(