| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Betrayal of the Phoenix |
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   befewa02 chapter 14 . 11/2/2019 Bitte mehr! |
| Millie072 chapter 14 . 6/2/2018 This is an intriguing tale but complete? It ain't. There are way too many loose ends. Who is the traitor? Ron? Where has Remus disappeared to? Will Draco survive his torture session? Will Blaise & Harry end up a couple? What happens the rest of Halloween? So very many unanswered situations. |
| dragons9 chapter 12 . 12/1/2017 This is great i love the Harry/Blaise pairing...there r only 2 of his best friends know about his trunk...so is Ron going to betray him because of his jealousy...why us Hermoine and Ginny getting jealous...he never showed any interest in them so why are they jealous... |
| Anon 3175 chapter 1 . 10/11/2017 Note: the spell you're using, 'cervix' is also the name of a part of a woman's reproductive organs. |
| SarahOlivier chapter 1 . 1/14/2016 Hermine "Perfect"Granger should not be teacher at all, she doesn't have the Patience for it |
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/10/2012 strange. You would think that Harry would be more annoyed and angry with Ron and Hermione for not attempting contact despite what Dumb Door said. As for the Dumb Door comment sorr yit is a habit that is ahrd to break and it feels weird not to write it like that. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/4/2012 Please continue. |
| Guest chapter 7 . 8/4/2012 I know, I know, I know. It's the Order of the Phoenix isn't it. They betray Harry that and Ron. |
| danbear chapter 14 . 5/17/2012 write more |
| kyuubi shadow chapter 14 . 12/23/2009 nice. |
| chaoswizard chapter 1 . 5/27/2009 r u going to finish this story if not can i take it over |
| AliceCullen0629 chapter 14 . 10/13/2008 ok story |
| dinawen chapter 14 . 8/13/2008 nice story |
| Draeconin chapter 4 . 4/3/2008 I’m not 100 sure what to start with. Okay, not your fault, I'm sure. FFN strips out some symbols. How to fix it? Spell out the word: percent. It's my personal policy to spell out numerals as words as well, since we speak in words, not symbols, but that's up to you. |
| Draeconin chapter 1 . 4/3/2008 Harry's marks are better than Ron's, and yet they both get the same amount of OWL's? I think the problem may lie in that you're counting Outstandings the same are you are EE's: one per. And what about Acceptables? Do they not get recognized? My suggestion would be one-half OWL per Acceptable, a full OWL per EE, and two per Outstanding. That would give Harry nine OWLs, Hermione twelve, and Ron five and a half - about right, in my opinion. (Of course if Harry got an Outstanding with honors in DADA, that would give him one more OWL, for a total of ten.) There were just too many of them to phantom. Fathom. A phantom is a ghost, or ghostly figure. |
