A great story here!

Oh wow this is so bad. One of the biggest things is that cringy af oc. She really gotta go xD

Amazing. You felt the need to use Japanese, transcribed badly into English, in an English fanfiction, but only some of the time. It's like you decided that you've showed off your ability to use the Japanese word for mother, "Kaa-san" (or as you put it Kassan), got bored, and just went with "Mother" instead.

ive never heard of a boy as old as Gohan referred to as chan unless someone was mocking them especially by a girl who likes them its usually kun hell ive never heard of a boy under 10 being called that.

Just so you know; neither 17 nor 18 have KI signatures. They can’t be traced unless u use another method besides KI sensing

J'aime.

GREAT STORY!

Amazing story!
It was wonderful and really funny!

For some reason I thino this ahould become a series nut that's probably just me

yep marron is definitely 17's neice

I really like this story but I felt as if it was lacking a couple of thing, the ending for instance, it felt kind of incomplete and also I would have liked a fight scene but each person is there own, I did like the plot of it and the humor and the oc are really well thought up, so all in all this was a very well rounded story and I hope you make a sequel, unless you already have in which case I feel stupid saying that

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interesting i wish there were more with her mother alive

wow u have ah no mercy for gohan do u poor guy