Great job on this. You do realize that you put this story under the Luna category and not Lina, right? just wanted to mention that.

Cute:} It' great;)

well done, i do enjoy what i read.

I guess its too late to ask for an epilouge 2 years later, but i'm a little satisfied since Zel said he will tell her he loves her soon! *still mad that she didn't read it sooner to convince you so runs off screaming colorful nothing*

Aw, kawaii!

very very nice. Great job. I espcialy liked the ending in the previous poem. That made me smile!