Reviews for Reflection |
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![]() ![]() ![]() keep up the good work on your story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope that sometime soon, in the near future, that things will slow down and get better so that you may continue this story. The plot is excellent and I've truly enjoyed reading what has been posted. I hope that you haven't given up on it! *Sending good vibes and well wishes* |
![]() ![]() The cycle starts again? ...it's too good a story to just end it that way. When life gets back on track, keep writing. You're too good of a writer to just give up like that. Good luck in the future. |
![]() ![]() Ah-ha! You explained my question very well. Your story is extremely linear and never seems to lose its footing on the plot, which is great! I love it! |
![]() ![]() I'm a little confused by this part, not because I don't know what's going on, but rather because you had stated earlier that after Tenshik had died, Sesshoumaru had gone and yelled to his father, "She's dead, are you happy now?". So... was he yelling at his father's grave? |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWsome story! will u reivew mine? plz |
![]() ![]() ![]() upd8 onegai |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah I like it! But...hm...how would you get inu out of the story hm...oh well I'll leave that up to you. I'll read the other chapters later I have to eat know bye bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa...at the beginning of the chapter, i actually thought tenshik was evil! or something...anyway, wishe you would update soon... |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww...already the sessy/kag romance begins! *squeals* don't you just lOVE sesshy's unpredictable attitude? *sighs* great chappie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WAHAHAA! the last part was so funny! lol, inubaka (lol) can read? modern day language? XD LOL |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoa...now that was kinda confusing... so..uh..that's a drea...hehe...ya... wow, i was actually caught up in kagome's confusion, frustration...T.T...great chappie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wa! you should REALLY put a divider or something between the author's notes and the story! i mean, one second it's the entrancing story, and then, ...uh...author's notes?, you ask yourself. lol, and update, update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wa..you should realli update more often, if you can! it's hard waiting for one chappie every 4 months! (srry, heh,) neway, sango seemed a bit mean this chapter, but otherwise the chappie was very nerve-wracking, which equals good. it's good to be able to draw emotions out of readers. |