This is a fascinating story

I also agree that Dohnaseek should have been more cautious in his approach towards Issei, as he doesn't know if it was him who trashed Raynare or not?
and observe him for a while to determine if Issei is really that person before eventually taking action.

So either issei gets permadeathed due to his own brain dead decision's or he awakens his sacred gear because naruto sure isn't saving him

Damn. Now I can't wait to find out what happens next!

So small and with a boring cliffhanger... Maybe it's better wait until the chapter 25 and I suspect that will be at the battle against Riser...

Great chapter looking forward to more

Issei is brain damage... Is fun to watch

Hmm its great, wish you continue the fight and cut it after. I think Rias asking Issei personally is the better choice considering he didnt die in this fight with Dohnaseek. There is three choice: 1. Issei die and Rias revive him; 2. Issei didnt die, Rias asked him, Issei accept; 3. Issei didnt die, Rias asked him, Issei declined. Each of those option will (I hope) get you different relation between Naruto and Rias & her peerage. Either one is fine imo, as long as Naruto didnt join the peerage (which I doubt he will in the first place cause its contradict his effort to lay low so far). Also wish you didnt focus much on pairing to early, it tends to ruin the action/adventure part. Looking forward for next

nice one

niceee

So long as you don’t bring any Naruto characters into this for no reason other than to add drama(like having Sasuke act OOC and want to take his girlfriend,I’ve actually seen some fics with that and I can only say that they were trash, or Sakura/Hinata to make a weird love triangle).I just dislike Naruto crossovers where there’s no explanation as to why other Naruto characters show up. I like the way you’ve written this story so far and look forward to the next chapter. I’m not a fan of Issei, if anything I’d act like this Naruto and only help him the first time, since he truly was out of his depth, but the second time he chose to look for “Yuma” of his own accord so I wouldn’t stop or help him after that decision. You’ve kept him in character, which is pretty good because most just try to make him badass from the start. I don’t understand why Rias already feels like Issei matters so much to her personally when she hasn’t even spoken a word yet to him, like yes you might have been able to help him but what’s done is done. I would rather read a Naruto centric fic in DxD where he takes the chance of being alone to fully mature, as in how’s he’s acting right now is much better than canon Naruto until Boruto where he’s an adult. I feel like Naruto was the only character who didn’t change from the start. He’s remained the exact same and it shows until he becomes an adult. So I would prefer to continue reading how you develop your Naruto over more of Issei, a good example is A Demon Lord’s Hero, where issei is still taken in by Rias but he isnt the main character, he isn’t the one making the changes to canon, it’s Shirou. I just can’t see the point of liking characters like Issei or Jaune from RWBY, so i prefer seeing them sidelined. I do enjoy your story but I don’t really want to hear about Issei getting his harem and becoming a harem king

Great chapter xD Cant wait for more

Liking Narutos attitude after getting sent here. Been a year even Naruto would struggle to stay fully positive after being alone.

You make Naruto look like an insensitive bastard who doesn't give a damn about his friends and comrades whom he has worked hard to achieve. It looks so damn unconvincing, Naruto wouldn't be like that and you and I know that.

Wait, hold the fuck up! Assuming a day has passed after Naruto saved him, don't you dare just have Issei be killed and revived by Rias. It would make no sense since Issei wouldn't have her flier anymore on him, more than likely he tossed it away in the trash after he got home and changed clothes. So either Rias or her Peerage followed him after school to keep an eye on him and save him from being killed, or he is killed off permenantly by Dohnaseek with not flier to call Rias. I am however hoping beyond hope Issei donsn't join Rias Peerage at all, hell, why not have him be saved by Sona's peerage, you know, because Naruto saved him and caused a butterfly effect.