Dude the helicarrier can go invisible

Sweet! Why has any notice a flying ship yet?

I’m so disappointed I’m myself frick me sorry you guys for giving the wrong story

Sorry guys got it mixed up

Wrong story

You posted the wrong chapter, this is for a Ben 10 story

Not trying to be disrespectful, far from it actually. But don't you think you were being too ambitious for your own good and the league you are categorized in?

I mean, please don't get offended here, but you lack the writing experience to hande all these iconic characters such as Iron-Man, Captain America, etc, to properly use them to their full potential. There are too many characters for me to take side on. Just because the Marvel heroes are good guys doesn't necessarily mean you can write them as you please and still hopefuls that the readers such as myself to root for them. I believe, you are being too ambitious.

Now, there is a way for you to salvage the situation. Either rewrote the chapter and give them more depth, or remove some of them so you and the readers can concentrated more on the main characters. Maybe instead of the new members of Avengers, only the original members were sent to MHA universe; Iron-Man, Captain America, Thor, Hulk, Black Widow and Hawkeye. Also, just not to make them too overpowered, reduced them to their earlier growth. Let Iron-Man have his Mark VII and have him struggle to build the rest of his suits without the resources he has in Marvel Universe. Let Thor only have Mjlonir (am I pronouncing it, right?) and let him undergo character development which revealed he doesn't need King's weapon to be the God of Thunder. And all other stuff.

Again, not throwing hates around here. I'm just advicing you to start small, and let the characters grow and becoming great. I hope you take my advice positively, and not negatively.

wow so many plot holes

Well, you did a longer chapter than the other story, although in the part that where they steal food does not really make much sense, they could hardly get a job or have got money or food in other places than in the UA, in addition to not see much participation of the other avengers in this chapter, although I hope they appear more or do something, although I would also like that at least some of them fight against some criminals and confront some Pro Heroes, and on couples my votes are for Pete x Itsuka, Rhodey x Mandalay, Capitan America x Ryukyu, Quicksilver x Bubble Girl, etc.

I’m working on it right now I’ll post tomorrow be patient please

Another chapter plz