Reviews for Holding Back From You
babzfgm chapter 1 . 8/11
I’m absolutely in love with this scenario. The whole what if. It would’ve been great!
I love it.
I’m hungry for more.
3
Fmadchensgirl chapter 1 . 7/24
I am not sure how many times I read this by now...I think about 10 times. It's soo soo beautiful! I love it soo soo much! I love how you made Harvey trying to show Donna first that it wasn't just Sex but that from his side it was more. And then Donna just couldn't do it bc she was afraid of it being to much...I had tears in my eyes girl! And the end...Sam...that was just ... I have now words and I definitely read it way too many times! I just love it soo much 3
Love, Kathrin
heavenindaylight chapter 1 . 7/23
How is it possible for you to make me feel so many things in such short time? This has got to be one of my favorite stories EVER. Your writing is so brilliant I have no words really. Just, thank you!
Follow-ur-Shadow chapter 1 . 7/23
This was amazing! The build up of angst, I felt it going either way, and my heart was pounding, and the ending was beautiful. When she says, 'I didn't love you' because she thought she wasn't letting herself, but he knew she was anyway... it was perfect and the words magical! Thank you so much for sharing! xx
LadyDarvey chapter 1 . 7/23
Ok this was really good! The pace was great and I like how you wrote with more action than dialogue. Looks and touching description gets me every time! So glad you gave this to use, it was on hot and wonderful!
krystalsteph chapter 1 . 7/23
Oh my God.

I have been struggling to write a story with this premise for months. I can't tell you how jealous I am that you wrote this & that you make it feel so effortless.

I only wish it was longer!
nikkaq chapter 1 . 7/23
"Because you showed me what it was like without you. And I'm not doing that again."

SAAAAAAM FIRST THING I READ THIS MORNING AND I'M CRYING I LOVE IT
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23
This chapter don't need to be revisited, but you can definitely start writing on part 2. I loved it. It was so intense. I want more, I need the love (and sexiness again) and the feelings to be shown and told. Please write part 2
saci chapter 1 . 7/23
The perfect mix between smut and angst, with a happy ending. I couldn't have asked for more. Loved it!
PurryCat chapter 1 . 7/23
Man, I thought your smut was brilliant, but this? Truly amazing. I'm near tears. It was so well-written. Great job!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23
Wow that was really good!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23
Awesome work
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23
You had me at assume Mitchell and Esther never happened and things only got better from there! I always feel it’s realistic & very plausible for Darvey to finally get together bc of another time. That their sexual tension finally hit a breaking point. Loved the line “It's about time she started taking.” This fic was SO good!
schmorygilmore chapter 1 . 7/23
GOD DANG IT SAM I LOVE YOU AND THIS
raffertysdonna chapter 1 . 7/23
i'm sat here crying, sam, how dare your writing be so amazing? your talent seriously never ceases to amaze me. you're so good at this. i'm emotional wtf
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