Absolutely. Amazing.
The Heart Wants was awesome, First Date was insanely good, and I cannot wait to see where this goes! I didn't expect to see the sequal to First Date, but man am I excited now! This chapter was so good! I think I've only seen one, maybe two stories go into the Citadel DLC (Which this is an interesting take on, loving it!), what you've written here is really good.
I can't wait for the next chapter, keep the good work up!

Wow! Had me on the edge of my seat the whole chapter! Again, poor Tali and Shepard can't catch a break. Yes, it does feel like Shepard is going one step forward, and two back. Wow, Pallin is really racist! Glad Tali made him eat some of his words without even trying! Hmmm, Sgt. Lambo? :-) Anyhow, very well done, and very eagerly awaiting the next update!