Excellent first chapter and i can't wait for more.

This looks so promising, please keep up the good work.

And about the little rant about NTR at the end...I completely feel you bro, they really should burn in hell

I really like this so far, great story, cant wait for the next chapter.

Will people see minato in naruto? now that his skin is light and he doesn't have whiskers he should look like minato's copy

Keep this going i need to read more.

Buenardopolis
9/10
Continue pls

Promising story.

This is certainly interesting, hope to see more.

I don’t usually consider anime characters personalities as real or anything to look for in real people but I would totally wife up a Makaira if I ever met someone similar over any character I have ever seen in anime or read on the site and it’s only the first chapter. I am going need some frequent updates because this just became my favorite fanfic.

Really liked this first chapter. The plot seems to be quite unique so I think this story has a lot of potential. The only thing I would probably not enjoy reading is a weak/average Naruto. He's supposed to be an Uchiha and the son of a kage level shinobi after all. Nonetheless I'm looking forward to the updates.

God job

A tail beast as an person to been on relationship and both narumi and naruto are half siblings don't make a wonderful start of story boring on future chapter know it your story but this paring gonna be bored and making naruto a ramen freak and orange lover boring come on his an uchiha should act like them somehow...just saying don't make it boring okay

Soooooo...
About the pairing, will her name still be Kurama?

This was a fun read. I'm interested in how this continues.

I definitely like the premise of the story, and I hope to see more!