Reviews for Youjo Senki : Optimus, The Chronicle of the Iron god |
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dropout-ninja chapter 3 . 7/24 Great job with all the dialogue- it really does add tension and weight to these interactions, kudos. Looking forward to the debut! |
A reader chapter 2 . 7/23 I like it when Prime ends up in another world especially ones with outdated technology. |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/23 Nice chapter |
dropout-ninja chapter 2 . 7/21 The major’s POV is quite fun to see; you do a great job capturing Tanya’s internal narrative! |
dropout-ninja chapter 1 . 7/20 Crossing these two over is a fascinating premise and I think there's a whole lot of potential here. I'm glad to get to beta such an engaging premise! This first chapter is quite attention grabbing Thanks for sharing! |